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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-01-19 09:11 PM



Together we'll cry, when you cry your tears
I'll listen quietly when you speak of your fears.
Together we'll get through your darkest night
I'll lay beside you until dawns new light.

Together we'll laugh 'neath skies above
I'll hold you gently when we make love.
With you I'll share not just a part,
but all of me, and all of my heart.

Together we'll find all of life's mystery
and together we'll make our own history.
If a time ever comes when your not sure
I'll kiss doubts away, while loving you more.

I now make this promise, simple and true
always I'll be there, and I'll always love you.


On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.
Donna Smith


© Copyright 2001 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-01-19 09:25 PM


Sounds like love to me!  

Denise

tracie66
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2 posted 2001-01-19 09:50 PM


What a tender and most beautiful promise that is   lovely read
~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



inot2B
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3 posted 2001-01-19 10:19 PM


Beautiful, someone is very lucky to have you in their life. God Bless and enjoy your love.
SEA
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4 posted 2001-01-19 11:34 PM


beautifully expressed devotion here.......I love this   -SEA
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2001-01-20 10:45 AM


Thanks everyone, it feels like love in the best kinds of ways.   But it is I that is the lucky one.   Life after twenty years with someone else ending sure can be a different feeling.  (It's a good thing...*s*)

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.
Donna Smith


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