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Trust is Broken
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Trust is Broken Putting yourself in someones hands Is where it all begins Your loyalty, feelings, emotions All laid out in equal proportions Yet sometimes without compromise A turn of events come with no surprise The Trust is Broken youve heard the story You cant replace the Trust by being sorry Some need to move on with the past in mind Even it will fade in time But those with scares in their heart Also have to get a new start |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, trust is probably the hardest thing to reclaim. Very sad. Denise |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
You know what they say... Trust is something that takes lots of time to earn, very little time to lose, and forever to regain. ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
amature~ this was a very strong piece of writing...you write about a very hard subject, trust. your thoughts are very well penned out and i admire how you just laid it all out on the line. great piece!! take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I liked this very much! Trust is very fragile.....  -SEA |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Thank you all for your replies. This is not written for anyone in particular. But to all that have been hurt when "Trust is Broken". Thank you again Amature2 |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
it's worse than a broken heart. Kathleen |
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