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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Creek Side Meet me creek side by the black valley oaks, trail the path of pines at Blue Ravine, where the fault lines have cut a chasm. On a blanket of leaves a repast for two, a cool libation - late harvest grapes, sweet offerings to tease tussling tongues. A private valley and hillside scapes, a streaming art song composed by ear, waiting for you if you will only come creek side, my dear. © 2001 Corinne Bailey |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It's a pleasure to read a piece so exquisite and not just splashed up there on the page! Corinne, this is a fine work and I am so priviliged to be able to read this. Kathleen |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Corinne~ I love this ....... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
A classic, sweet invitation, Corinne. I'd gladly come. |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Corinne, This poem painted wonderful word pictures...your imagery was wonderful. David2 |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Excellent. Me likes! Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Corinne! Denise |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
...bump... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, I'll be waiting on the bank, by a fire with a guitar.  Park |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
My heart-felt thanks for your sweet comments! Corinne |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nice write corrine! i like it much looks like youve got some takers too... (send that guitar player to my porch will ya...  )hugs, g "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to the point where we would think so..." |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, DV! Surely there is enough of Park to go around! Corinne |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This is delightful! The second stanza is my favorite, and "tussling tongues" is exceptionally amazing. Nice to see ya! Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
All the ingredients for a wonderful time... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Temptress, nice to see you too! How the heck are you? Thank you, Elizabeth! Corinne |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
How did I miss one of yours. I am so glad to see this one pop up in front of my eyes as I would have hated to miss it. You have not lost one bit of power or beauty in your poems and this is one that shows that well. Wonderful read as all of yours are. BTW Did you ever get the Humvee? |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
California here I come - whooo eeee - love this - love that word too: 'tussled' too cool. Lovely Baccanal you propose - my guitar's lousy - settle for a small keyboard? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ What a purty piece of poetry ! It's so nice to read your thoughts. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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