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SEA
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0 posted 2001-01-19 08:13 PM



Life can be so worrisome……….tiresome……….demanding
There are ups and downs………….highs and lows
Things are right, then they're wrong
It's insane
We argue…………….fight
Disagree……………..agree
Understand , help, heal
Love, laugh, and cry
It's not always pretty………..this world can be mean
But then,
I have you
And I know …………somehow, someway
Everything is gonna be fine.


~SEA~


Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
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1 posted 2001-01-19 08:21 PM


I'm not quite sure how to describe this but I do like, it leaves me with a smile  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.



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2 posted 2001-01-19 08:28 PM


EagleOne~   smiles are good    I wrote this for my husband....he's been going through some rough times at his work, and he is finally done with it and moving on to a MUCH better job!   thank you   -SEA
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3 posted 2001-01-19 11:15 PM


SEA,
I like the feeling in this piece.  Excellently expressed.

Poeminister

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4 posted 2001-01-19 11:30 PM


SEA - You have summed up life in a nicely written package.  

Frankie

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5 posted 2001-01-19 11:45 PM


SEA - Hugging you and holding on!...

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PM~ thank you  

Frankie~that is very nice of you to say, thank you  

Sunshine~ Don't let go!  

-SEA

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7 posted 2001-01-23 02:33 AM


Fine being a very apt description of this write by you!!!... very, very fine!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

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8 posted 2001-01-23 07:27 AM


Glad that your hubbie have done the rough time and moved on in a better job.......

(((hugs)))

Charisma

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9 posted 2001-01-23 11:39 AM


Knowing the love that you hold for your husband I am sure that he found these times of turmoil not as bad as they could have been.  Beautiful expression of what true love is all about and I am still now as always smiling with the knowledge that love like this does exist.  Thank you for sharing that with us.

If you find yourself stranded in a storm
...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together

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10 posted 2001-01-23 11:47 AM


enjoy the read
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11 posted 2001-01-23 01:17 PM


ahh yes...quiet comfort..
sweet and sincere Sea-girlie
im sure your his port in the storm
or shall i say poet in the storm  

Poetry is not an opinion expressed ...
It is a song that rises from a bleeding wound ...
or a smiling mouth.
~Kahlil Gibran~

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12 posted 2001-01-23 01:54 PM


.........still hugging.........

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13 posted 2001-01-23 02:39 PM


Excuse me while I go hug my boyfriend...

"Hearts will become practical when they make them unbreakable"
~The Wizard of Oz
Much love all,
Krissie


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14 posted 2001-01-23 07:44 PM


nice to venture out into the world out there with someone besides you...enjoyed the thought
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15 posted 2001-01-23 07:49 PM


for better or for worse...you took that vow and you are a strong soul to continue through tough times as well as easy times...Hope everything works out...Im sure it will...youve already committed to it

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

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