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Enotneicna
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0 posted 2001-01-19 08:06 PM


Our souls are ancient yours and mine
Though you be Dragonborne and I Human
I hear the summons from within
Feel the images rise and soar
There is an energy that surrounds and permeates
If only I could see the music, the gold song

We are bonded you and I
Though you be Dragonborne and I Human
which transcends the linear
To culminate and shape thought
From blinding obscurity to painful clarity
If only I could see the music, the gold song

We are of one essence you and I
Though you be Dragonborne and I Human
A melding of heart and mind
Beyond the realms of dimension
where true magic exists
If only I could see the music, the gold song

We are as one being you and I
Though you be Dragonborne and I Human
We merge in a dream's reality
The magic expands and engulfs
Positives and negatives collide in an instant
And I can see the music, the gold song

Enotneicna
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1-19-01

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



© Copyright 2001 Sharon Lee Wilcox (Enotneicna) - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-01-19 08:24 PM


This reads like a song.......very musical....and the images......beautiful   -SEA
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2 posted 2001-01-19 08:26 PM


Ancient sould bonded through time.....I loved it.

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.



Enotneicna
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3 posted 2001-01-20 01:24 PM


SEA......This woke me up in the morning and I had to write it down......some of my best pieces are borne that way.......Someone else said this sounded like a one-sided love song......glad you enjoyed it.

many blessings always,
Eno

EagleOne......though most would call the dragon a mythological creature I do feel a bond and it feels ancient......you think I could have been a dragon in a previous life?  I have written other dragon poems and it felt like there was a dragon looking over my shoulder putting images and words in my mind......so glad you enjoyed it......that's what it'a all about.

many blessings always,
Eno

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



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4 posted 2001-01-20 01:36 PM


Yes, this does read like a song! What an incredible dream, you sure dream wonderful images! This was very well written, glad you caught this dream down, my friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enotneicna
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5 posted 2001-01-20 01:44 PM


Noah....you are very welcome....This one flowed out of the pen and onto the paper so effortlessly that I almost don't feel like I wrote it.

many blessings always,
Eno< !signature-->

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!




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