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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-01-19 06:50 PM




Night’s Flight




Chase me into night’s flight
Fly with me into the starlight
Make me flee with glee
Hear my murmured plea
Follow me through delight
Chase me into the night

Pursue me into desire’s fire
Hunt with me ever higher
Make me mad be glad
Enjoy me being bad
Come frolic with me sire
Pursue me into desire’s fire

Trail me into heartbeat’s heat
Seek with me fires repeat
Make me sigh and fly
Take me there on high
Trace in wondrous beat
Trail me into heartbeat’s heat

Marsha


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Only a memory of the same
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[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-20-2001).]

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Martie
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1 posted 2001-01-19 07:00 PM


Wonderful Marsha...how could any man resist?  I'm quite sure they could not.
Poeminister
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2 posted 2001-01-19 07:06 PM


Beautiful, very desireful.  Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

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3 posted 2001-01-19 07:40 PM


Marsha Marsha Marsha...your brevity is showing, and on you, it looks very, very good!
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4 posted 2001-01-20 10:49 AM


Martie love, thank you this is me being brief, not subtle just brief. I do truly thank you, and appreciate you.
Take care
              Mushy
                

Poeminister, thank you too hon, I really do value your visit, and that you have taken the time to leave a reply.
Take care
               Mushy
                  
Kari love, thank dear heart, but this brevity is such hard work, it's the seach to make one work do the job of five. Which is why you're so much better than I am love.
Take care love
                  Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-01-20 10:55 AM


wow!

Kathleen



Kethry
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6 posted 2001-01-20 01:26 PM


seconding the Wow from Irish Rose.
write on
Keth


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7 posted 2001-01-20 01:31 PM


Marsha~
I LOVE IT !
Yes !  Your talent is growing !
Sweetie ... you're just a little shooting star !
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


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Marsha
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8 posted 2001-01-21 06:12 AM


Kathleen love, thank you, I actually have to thank Margie for this graphic, which is the thing that makes this thing worth a wow.
Take care love
                     Mushy
                        

Kethry love, thank you, you are as always too bias love, my stretching exercises are continuing, but my wings will always be a bit stumpy I think.
Take care dear heart
                      Mushy
                        
Margie girl, and your graphic makes this it really does. And I thank you so very much for it love.
                            
Take care love
                      Mushy
                        
and thank you for showing me how  
    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Paula Finn
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9 posted 2001-01-21 07:14 AM


Brevity? Brevity? Cmom now Miss Marsha lets talk REAL brief...a gauntlet thrown down...its senryu time for you...yes oh yes oh yes....I will hold your hand

         A Phoenix rises
     Out of ashes since grown cold
         Ressurection Day
        

Marsha
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10 posted 2001-01-21 01:24 PM


Paula love, a 'Senryu' wouldn't you prefer something else? Anything else? Except one of those Hakiu thingymajigs! I don't even know where to start, Oh help! Anybody? Somebody?
A clue, I need a clue, pleaseeeeeeeee!
Take pity on me, I plead
(Yes I know I'm a miserable pleader!!)
Oh my!
                Help me please
                    Mushy
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Bill Charles
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11 posted 2001-01-21 01:35 PM


Hi Marsha,

This is wonderful to read, very nicely done. And the graphic is stupendous.

BC

Marsha
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12 posted 2001-01-23 12:41 PM


Bill, thank you so very much, these brief little experiments of mine are me trying to grow. Although I have explained that you do need good quality stock in the first place. As in you can't make a silk purse out of a sows ear   but they don't listen to me.
They just make me practice a lot more!
Thank you muchly
Take care
                   Mushy
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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