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EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
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Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2001-01-19 05:02 PM



Just a little sillyness I needed to vent after travelling to and from work this week!


Move on, move on
Let me past
I have a need
Must go fast

Hurry up, hurry up
Don't you know
I must be gone
I've somewhere to go

Slow down, slow down
I say as you pass
Fools in a hurry
Going nowhere fast!



"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.



© Copyright 2001 E.T. Meehan - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-01-19 05:32 PM


HA! Been there, done that...don't live there any more!  

"I have a need...
a need for speed..."

Top Gun

Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20
Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan
2 posted 2001-01-19 06:44 PM


Man, you must be the guy that blows by me every time I get on the road!  The older I get the faster everyone else goes.  I liked your poem anyway.  Hugs, ann
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
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Between a laugh and a tear...
3 posted 2001-01-19 08:15 PM


Sunshine ~ Yeah! That same quote came to me as I wrote this, I think I've finally outgrown the need now.  

Mother Earth ~ It seems exactly the same way to me as well.  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.



Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
4 posted 2001-01-20 01:56 AM


First one there WINS....but you know
what...they never tell you WHAT you win....
I knew I should have read the fine print  
love your silliness my friend and so glad
that you had a nice vacation...oh ya and did
I mention jealous  



You can swim in the waves of the weave...without sinking into the mind of the weaver~


Paula Finn
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missouri
5 posted 2001-01-20 02:06 AM


VVRRROOOOMMMM BEEP BEEP hey wanna DRAG?!?! My cars faster than yours HAHAHAHA this is too too cute you ARE silly!!!
Startime
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6 posted 2001-01-20 03:34 AM


*giggling with delight*oops you have been in my car with me right. *giggling* but look over there the mountains are so beautiful that we need to slow down to fully enjoy the magic they create. *sigh* thank you for this delightful read. Much love and hugs to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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JamesMichael
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7 posted 2001-01-20 07:21 AM


Seems like every time your running a little late for work or a date you manage to get behind the slowest person in the world and unless you maintain the proper attitude you are thinking bad thoughts while you are "going nowhere fast!"....James
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
8 posted 2001-01-20 08:07 AM


eagle..love your silliness..   

this sounds like atlanta traffic..loved the flow of traffic there..if your not goin at least 80, sit on the side and let us pass!!  lol   (blue lights pulled me at 85mph and i didnt even get a ticket cause they "dont like to bother with speeders much"..haha)

this was a fun one  

hugs, g


"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
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Between a laugh and a tear...
9 posted 2001-01-21 01:37 AM


Butterfly ~ I'll email you the fine print.  

Paula ~ I'll just move on over and let you past.  

Startime ~ indeed there are times when we need to slow down and enjoy what life has to offer us, thanks!  

James ~ Yes, it is all too easy to do that.

g ~ Glad you enjoyed, take care!




"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.



Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
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West Virginia
10 posted 2001-01-21 02:01 AM


I just have to ask...Have you ever gotten behind someone that was super slow or did something that really annoyed you? So, you blow the horn at that person, like the horn won't be there tomorrow, just to find it was someone that thought you were being nice  and they waved back cause you beeped! So, you feel all bad and wave back too like you meant to wave in the first place. I do that all the time. K, I know I am going way off but just reminded me.LMAO Really a cool poem.

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Paula Finn
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missouri
11 posted 2001-01-21 02:13 AM


LMAO....you better go FASTER Im right behind you

[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 01-21-2001).]

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