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Content In The Promise Of Love
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Content In The Promise Of Love |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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Content In The Promise Of Love Moonlight and candlelight Reflect softly off our bodies Where in the halflight Are heard sighs Sighs of contentment Shadows trace along the walls And on my ivory skin You trace your own shadows Echoing murmurs Murmurs of promise Silk sheets delicately slide Between the two of us As words slip from lips like silk Creating whispers Whispers of love Then content we sleep Dreaming of the promise Of newfound love < !signature--> ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 01-19-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sounds more like you're living this dream, my happy friend....be well....God Bless this union.... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sunshine...thank you my friend. You seem to be the sole responder on this one  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...no Ruth...it's just been one of those weeks....watch! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Sighs of contentment" "Murmers of promise" "Whispers of love" This is so beautiful Ruth. Sighing, murmering, whispering ... what a wonderful mood you've set with this delicate and romantic piece, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Kit and Sunshine...thank you both |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HootieGal~ What a lovely vision of love. Just wonderful to see you so happy, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Seems like a dream fullfilled Beautiful writing, as always Liz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oooh me likes this one... written like a midnight whisper... very cool poetry hoot-girl... and ya know what comes after a night like this dont ya ... yeppers....morning and oatmeal  teeheelove the feel of this one well done When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is such a romantic poem (sigh) So filled with love and passion, shadows, murmurs, they enchant this piece so lightly! You have such a beautiful heart! Excellent poem, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Very beautiful! Love these whispers of love |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow Ruth! And what a beautiful promise of love it is. Very well expressed, but, then again, I'm sure it flows easily from your pen when Rodger lives in your heart I am so happy for you both!Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you everyone ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Ah, such bliss! I can only say that you've voiced feelings I have known, most marvelously! I'm so glad you've got Rodger! The days are slipping past until the magical one! I'm so happy for you both! . The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
So well put, the words just slide softly down with such ease.... really enjoyed! "Hearts will become practical when they make them unbreakable" ~The Wizard of Oz Much love all, Krissie |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Once more...thank you |
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