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artsygrl
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 55
Florida

0 posted 2001-01-19 11:05 AM

If I could understand you I would,
But there is no information to analyze
only your silence, which speaks too much
And yes I vehemently deny through each spoken bond of friendship
I have never lied of my affection,
Just in words not spoken
I love you, but I won't
-Barbara M. Brewer-
copywrite 2001
01-19-01

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-01-19 07:45 PM

I know EXACTLY what you mean.........this hits very close to my own heart......very well done!

-SEA

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

2 posted 2001-01-19 08:01 PM

It would take me all day to explain why, so I'll just say I like this.

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

3 posted 2001-01-20 07:49 PM

Great write, artsygirl! I like this.

sp

I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

WinterTalon
Member

since 2001-01-14

Posts 141
Brooksville, KY, USA

4 posted 2001-01-20 08:28 PM

I relate!

~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

5 posted 2001-01-20 10:58 PM

"If I could understand you I would,
But there is no information to analyze
only your silence, which speaks too much"

It is hard to understand someone when they don't speak to you, isn't it? Great writing, keep it up!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

6 posted 2001-01-20 11:03 PM

I've sooooo been there! You've put it into words perfectly.

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Lady Lightning
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 422
Kentucky

7 posted 2001-01-21 05:47 AM

If I could understand you I would,
But there is no information to analyze

I have never lied of my affection,
Just in words not spoken
I love you, but I won't

WOW, how hard this hits..Great write artsy..I liked it, lots!! Hugs ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

artsygrl
Member

since 2000-11-17

Posts 55
Florida

8 posted 2001-01-21 10:59 AM

Wow I feel so much better thank you all for your wonderful comments...Glad I'm not alone on this *smil*

artsygrl

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

9 posted 2001-01-21 11:06 AM

This is great,

Only
If i ........ could

bernie

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

10 posted 2001-01-21 11:43 AM

Way to go...enjoyed this...

jwesley

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2001-01-21 12:07 PM

nice poem

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