Infinite dreams rush... Love-Struck Romeo... Part III

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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2001-01-19 09:49 AM

Dreams rush into my head,
As I sound a whisper
Deliriously into
The cool mist of beauty,
Glistening a sparkle
In my lax languid sky.

Dreams rush into my head,
As I swim in my sea,
An ocean of craving
Free like eternity,
As I picture you dance
And frolic in my dreams.

Dreams rush into my head,
As my closet throws smiles
Love's willing prisoner -
Till next eternity,
Recalling the brilliance
In your embracing warmth.

Dreams rush into my head,
As my moist breaths mark shapes
Of two loving warm hearts,
On misty window panes
While throwing kisses,
In my eventless wait.

Dreams rush into my head,
As I perceive a truth,
As clear as a crystal,
Beaming out of the void
Boxes of dark shadows,
Of my aimless past life.

Dreams rush into my head,
As I figure my feel
For you and yours for me
Instantly noticing
That it's your love for me
The elixir of life.

I feel you and feel love -
An amazing feeling;
Like playing in Eden
Like flying amid clouds
Like shining amongst stars
Like swimming with dolphins.

~°~

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2001-01-19 12:10 PM

Sudhir lyer~

It is so good to see you back!!

You have been missed.

This is GORGEOUS!!

-SEA

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2001-01-19 12:50 PM

beautifully written..loved it

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2001-01-19 07:47 PM

Keep dreaming...they do sometimes come true!! Enjoyed the poem sir! And it's nice to see you here.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-01-19 07:56 PM

"like swimming with dolphins"....

oh yes!

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2001-01-19 10:22 PM

Hi there dear Sud welcome back
This is so perfectly penned, just beautiful as always
~HUG~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2001-01-19 10:26 PM

So wonderful to see you again Sudhir ... this is just lovely! What a beautiful piece to grace my eyes this evening. Thank you!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

7 posted 2001-01-22 05:19 AM

And what pleasure it is to be graced by the eyes of all you wonderful people, to be read, to be understood...

I appreciate your kind words as always...

(((hugs))) to all,
My regards,
Sudhir

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2001-01-22 07:22 AM

Sudhir,
Oh yes! You are definitely back and your write is as wondrous as ever.
write on
Keth

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

9 posted 2001-01-24 03:20 AM

Thank you so much O Kethry...

Regards to you,
Sudhir.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2001-01-24 12:30 PM

Sudhir, many hearts were touched with this writing. Hope that you are fine, and wish you the best.

BC

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