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Unexpected Answers |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Unexpected answers came today Telling you exactly what needed to be done ………..and why You've been trying so hard to make it fit Make it work……………when it didn't When it couldn't When it shouldn't When you didn't really want it to …………anyway so simple really just had to find your way to the door it wasn't locked you didn't have to knock only walk through…………. And when you did Ahhhhhh and when you did The answers were there. 01-18-01 11:10 pm ~SEA~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Yes, yes! So much said in so few words. Even I have to remind myself from time to time of your message. Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Bravo!!this is beautiful and said with such talent with so few words. Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
I love this poem.....the answers are at the door.......I just need to get on the other side of it !!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Melissa~ thank you so much  Startime~ nice to see you thank you 1 slick Lady~ I wrote this for my husband, he found his way to the door and out! I am so proud of him  ( thank you )-SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
It is nice to find the answers so unexpectedly after searching so hard for them and then realizing that maybe with a little more calmness the next time it won't be so stressful. Wonderful write and an excellent bit of wisdom for us. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well done SEA.... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA--I like this muchly, so impatient are we to find the answers sometimes logic is lost as we search, when really our approach is the key, and this poem expresses that truth wonderfully...Excellent writing. Poemininster "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Lynn32 New Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 4 |
Oh My GOSH! You've hit a nerve! Fantastic. You have won my heart. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sea...James |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
How simple true answers come when written by you!!! Wonderful write Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ thank you, if you knew all the crap my husband has had to deal with.......it took a lot for him to walk out that door Sunshine~ thank you PM~ yes, and sometimes it is a matter of faith and courage thank you Lynn~  thank you! James~ thanks Pepper~  thank you -SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
As long as its the right door you open...this was hard hitting Sea... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
yes...sometimes we search too hard for the answers..and we skip right over them...but if we'd just go to the door...... great write SEA hugs, g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SEA, this is so spot on! Sometimes we struggle and stuggle searching everywhere for answers only to find they are under our onses. Very well done! write on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
On the mark my friend...don't know how I missed it the first time around. Enjoyed, as usual... jwesley (back to the top!) |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
I think theres a lesson to be learned here. I agree with thode above,alot said in such few words. Nice Job. Mr.Magoo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ A hug for hubby ! And a *HUGS* for you for being so supportive. Loved it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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