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When Sorrow Comes To Lay
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When Sorrow Comes To Lay |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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When Sorrow Comes To Lay ~*Marge Tindal*~  When sorrow comes to lay across the heart, it does so without invitation. It intrudes and drapes the room in quaking sobs. Shaking to the very core of me, I cry out for it to go. Uninvited, it invades in shades of gray, permeating my very soul with a sadness I don't want to know. If tears could drown it, it would be dead. I know there is a light out there - Please, someone help me open the curtain so that I might see the light again. Let me plant a flower where sorrow has been. A reminder that all things flourish in the light of knowing, I am not alone. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 01-19-2001).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, sublime this time, and the picture...perfect! write on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You are not alone, Marge. HUGS Heartfelt poem, beautifully done. Denise |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--yes, sorrow is that way...and it hurts me to see yours...you are not alone..but I know it can feel that way. Hugs! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Marge, this is wonderfully done, but so sad. I hope your sadness turns to smiles soon. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"all things flourish in the light of knowing..." And YOU, me lovely one, should KNOW... many many heartfelt hugs here. special lady, you ARE!!!! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Even a darker poem from you is penned beautifully! Excellent flow and theme. No, you are never alone, light will find it's way to you again. And, boy, do I ever relate to your words, but, now I also take heed to your wise lines at the end. Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You are not alone. Kathleen |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
There is always a light, reach for it and peace will come. Hugs, Deb |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Holding you, my friend and planting hope... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What an incredible description of sorrow... an uninvited visitor that overwhelms your life and refuses to drown even when deluged by tears. This beautiful poem has a depth of understanding that I fear is drawn from experience, not imagination... so I can only assure you... you're not alone. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Margie-girl ... it tis so rare we see a poem like this from your pen ... but you so sincerely express the sadness that we all feel at one time or another ... whether you pen this for someone else or to express your own emotions, as you can see you wrote it so well you've touched many. take care sweet poet ya know we all love ya here ... and your last line says what we all share here as well. love to ya |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends, please know that I feel your hugs and your prayers. My son, David and his lovely wife, Kim have lost the baby they were expecting and it has touched us deeply. So dearly I feel the friendships. Please keep them in your prayers. Bless you. ~*Marge*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, Marge, I am so sorry to hear this. You will all be in my prayers. Email me if ever you need anything! Melissa~ The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ You are so sweet and I thank you from the bottom of my heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My prayers are being said for them as well as you my friend. |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
Beautifully said Marge as always...May your tears be the nurishment that the seeds of memories you have planted need to sprout. nona |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Sometimes sorrow has a way of making us feel and see things different than they actually are. Beautiful write Marge. Rich |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
no, ms. marge... you are NOT alone... i am here reading this painfully scripted verse and i send you hugs.... along with my words of praise to the fine poet you are.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
When friends catch and hold your tears - the sorrow is diluted. Bless each of you for your thoughts. I know I am not alone. There is a great light shining. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh Marge, I'm so sorry to hear about this. Your poem is a beautiful reminder that, although sorrow may touch our lives, we can move on and still remember. Your family will be in my prayers. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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emmalouise Junior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 26 |
Marge, What a beautiful expression of heartfelt emotion. Your poem touched me on the deepest level. My prayers are with you and your family. Best, Emma |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Your words are gripping, well felt. I once heard a quote that went something like this, "Plant your own garden and decorate your own soul, instead of waiting for someone to bring you flowers." (Don't remember who said it.) Anyway, your poem reminded me of that...finding beauty where there is pain. Marie~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
To each friend, I say a humble thank you. For you have shown me the beauty of your friendships. This family thanks you for your thoughts and prayers. Bless you all for your kindness. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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