Standing where angels weep

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Open Poetry #12

Standing where angels weep

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-01-18 09:35 PM

Standing where angels weep

I smell you in the rain
in it I feel you once again
your passion on my skin
slowly draws you in
standing where angels weep
intoxicating my heart so deep
descending upon my lips first
moisture to quench lusty thirst
then touching every place
your movements they retrace
I let it wash me down
in it hear your sound
tender as you go
softly water flows
caressing like your ghost
I am but your host
sorrowful as you said good bye
uncontrollable tears fall from the sky
memorized lightning in my brain
within me shall you remain

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

1 posted 2001-01-18 09:56 PM

Beautifully erotic reminds me of a fantasy I once had.
Well done
Rich

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-01-18 09:57 PM

Just phenomenal - so extremely well penned! This is such a mournful poem of longing, yet so beautiful to read! The imagery and the flow is perfect

Wow! to these lines:

"your passion on my skin
slowly draws you in
standing where angels weep
intoxicating my heart so deep
descending upon my lips first
moisture to quench lusty thirst"

Take care,
Melissa< !signature-->

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 01-18-2001).]

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

3 posted 2001-01-18 10:26 PM

WOW all I can say is WOW. I loved it.
Love and light,
Richard

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2001-01-19 01:47 PM

Rich,Melissa & Richard .......thank you all
I am so glad you enjoyed.......Helen

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

5 posted 2001-01-20 12:34 PM

Words that fill an open soul.
Well done Dear Lady.

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