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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-01-18 04:44 PM


China Doll

Sweet China doll
it's really true.
I want to fall
in love with you.

Would be untrue
lest we forget
desire was inspired
when our eyes met.

Our friendship grows
as softness flows
and now I know
a heart's warm glow.

Sweet China doll
I like you
the most of all
and I will run to you
each time you call.

I think of you
night and day.
Come to me.
Stay not away.

Now I wait
for the call
from none other than
my sweet China doll.

Jameslee@January18,2001
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[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 01-18-2001).]

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Honeybee
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1 posted 2001-01-18 04:47 PM



What a treat - two sweet love poems from you!   A great sentiment and flow!

Take care,
Melissa


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SEA
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2 posted 2001-01-18 04:51 PM


James, James, James........this is SO sweet   -SEA
Victoria
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3 posted 2001-01-18 06:41 PM


Sounds like you dont waste any time james haa...glad to see you are happy AGAIN..

                 ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



rascalx
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4 posted 2001-01-18 06:48 PM


The mushy romantic in me says "Bravo!" - a beautiful little love poem  ) More! More!
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-01-19 02:26 PM


Thank you so much Melissa, Sea, Victoria and rascal....James
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