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Lana
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0 posted 2001-01-18 09:21 AM


I love my wife


“Guys, I love my wife
she is the meaning for my days
and nights.  I love her more than
anything
she makes my heart and soul to sing.”

“I’ll never leave her that’s for sure.”

Workday fell into evening time
the dishes done at last

“Honey, are you coming to bed?”

“Sure, I’ll be there in a bit,”

He’d never leave her.

Lights go out and PC comes on
another blinking light

“Honey, what are you doing in there please
don’t you know I need you here?”

“Be right there,”
Four hours later, his body weak
and eyes red
he wanders in and reaches for her
“here, I am, my dear.”

“I’ll never leave you sugar

he sure didn't have to...

He already had.



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SEA
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1 posted 2001-01-18 09:24 AM


This is painfully sad......well written, really packs a punch.....hugs   -SEA
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-01-18 09:31 AM


Ouch. What a mirror.
doreen peri
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3 posted 2001-01-18 09:50 AM


WOW!
HopeS
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4 posted 2001-01-18 10:00 AM


Extremely well written !!!
I wonder why I am not in the least
shocked , its because all what you descibed
is happening more and more since the arrival
in homes of the P.C

Wilfred Yeats
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5 posted 2001-01-18 10:17 AM


I know of homes where it's equal time on the PC - perhaps -just perhaps- the 'puter has replaced football - OR the church sewing circle... - Your point is good - AND  you nailed it down with her plea - I don't know why I'm playing Devil's advocate. Right/(write) on!
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