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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Just now I dreamed I read goodbye in words I thought were only mine the note he'd penned said "please don't cry I was just a dream in passing..." and very much to my surpise? Just now I woke up laughing. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Serenity, that is better than not waking up at all! Congratulations! Kathleen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Kath? gotta laugh again, 'cause I really wouldn't know...but thank you! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ *Hugs* ... I hear your laughter on the wind.  I LIKE this, little gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I was just a dream in passing" wow, I love that line......great poem!! -SEA |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You are a dream but it's not in passing... I on the other hand am a nightmare that lingers in the back of your mind..  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
how'd you DO that?!? great writing, ms. K-  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Marge? I leave ya with a quote... "I get knocked down. But I get up again..." and I forget who sings it...someone will help me out I'm sure. and thanks for the giggles the other night, ya cheered me up! ((((((((mom)))))))))))) SEA---you are the sweetest thing...love ya much lady! as always, I thank you! sharon--Did YOU do that? you witch you...lol...and *winks* doreen....I dunno....lol hugs to ya! (had to come back to hug me mum!) [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 01-18-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Serenity, I love this and the tone in this piece. Excellent writing.... Poeminister PS "I get knocked down. But I get up again..." ...Chumbawamba! [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-18-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity...GREAT! More of this please...and soon? |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
I love this..especially the last line! Very well done  ) |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Great write, serenity! All too familiar feelings. I like this! sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Poe? Thanks luvie...for helping me with the musical reference...rumor has it I've an awful memory! Thanks again! rascal? thanks much for popping in and your kind reply... Sunshine..I'm working on that dream machine. hugs and gratitude. snow? so glad you enjoyed...I thank you as well... HUGS TO FORUM |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Fantastic!!! Superb twist at the end! Poetic justice at its fullest. This was so much fun! Of course, because of how you ended it. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Just great wonderful write ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
WOOHOO oh yeah girl...laugh its the very best revenge...and the best medicine as well...you taught me that |
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