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Nothing, Now Suffice

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 01-18-2001 02:49 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

If there were but
one drop of dew
in rainbow field
of sparkling hue,
on hands and knees,
beyond Pride's yield--
Know you, now--I would find you.
I do not care for wishes, grant...
However, sweet, is sweet romance...
Bodies--all, they pass away.
Forever--I have felt this way.
You remain connecting piece
to puzzle of eternity.

My heart is but a sacrifice;
and if I could, I'd offer twice--
"Receive this blade,"
the virgin prayed,
"for nothing else, will now suffice..."

(*repost from open 7* for a friend*)



[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 01-18-2001).]
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Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 01-18-2001 02:54 AM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Love will ALWAYS find a way.  What a wonderful write from you this morning and it looks like once again.......WE TWO are up and unable to find sleep.
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with you


2 posted 01-18-2001 08:53 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Serenity~ awesome write   -SEA
Janet Marie
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3 posted 01-18-2001 09:17 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Know you, now--I would find you.
I do not care for wishes, grant...
However, sweet, is sweet romance...
Bodies--all, they pass away.
Forever--I have felt this way.
You remain connecting piece
to puzzle of eternity.
===============
you write me butterfly heart this morn me twin...
but then you always do ...


""for nothing else, will now suffice..."

hugs baby
love to ya
me


When to the sessions of sweet silent thought,
I summon up remembrance of things past ...
I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought.
~Shakespeare~
Irish Rose
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4 posted 01-18-2001 07:25 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

very romantic and almost medievil, I love this.

Kathleen

Denise
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5 posted 01-18-2001 10:24 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautifully done, Serenity!

Denise
maxtec1
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6 posted 01-18-2001 10:32 PM       View Profile for maxtec1   Email maxtec1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit maxtec1's Home Page   View IP for maxtec1

I really enjoyed the feel of this poem. great job.
Love and light,
Richard
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7 posted 01-18-2001 10:59 PM       View Profile for Poeminister   Email Poeminister   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poeminister's Home Page   View IP for Poeminister

"one drop of dew
in rainbow field
of sparkling hue,
on hands and knees,
beyond Pride's yield--
Know you, now--I would find you."

Serenity,
I like the imagery in these lines.  Beautifully written.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

iliana
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8 posted 09-27-2006 02:30 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

You know I know.  Love it.  *hugs*....jo
 
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