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spiked
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0 posted 2001-01-18 12:21 PM


Touch me
And in turn
I’ll touch you
Confide in me
And with you I will share the world
Reside in me
Linger in the center of my thoughts
Release me
From the wants of anticipation
Remember me
I am more than a figment of your imagination
Want me
Because there is very little I have ever wanted more
Relax me
Exhausting is a mind that runs
Make love to me
Let me know that what I feel is true
Touch me
For I am touching you




[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 01-18-2001).]

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Victoria
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1 posted 2001-01-18 12:24 PM


I really enjoyed your words rich..
nicely penned..

                     ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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2 posted 2001-01-18 12:26 PM


SPIKED, this poem sure is sweet...
I scrolled back up to re-read again and these words I quote just had me sighing...

"Reside in me
Linger in the center of my thoughts"

Splendid poem thank you for the delightful read...
*~coco~*

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3 posted 2001-01-18 12:26 PM


Rich~ I picture this being said while slow dancing.......very nicely done   -SEA
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4 posted 2001-01-18 12:44 PM


"Linger in the center of my thoughts."

Priceless line, absolutely priceless!

Enjoyed the whole of the poem, too!

spiked
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5 posted 2001-01-18 01:30 AM


Thank you Victoria, Coco and Vas
Sounds like a wonderful addition to the image Sea

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6 posted 2001-01-18 03:06 AM


Positively inviting, rich...
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7 posted 2001-01-18 06:05 AM


Rich~
I loved this piece, great read, great write...well done  
~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Lady Lightning
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8 posted 2001-01-18 11:14 AM


spiked...
I really, really liked this...

Confide in me
And with you I will share the world
Reside in me
Linger in the center of my thoughts

These lines "stuck" in my head most..
Absoultely wonderful pen,
Thanks for a great read this morning..
Hugs.... ~LL~



The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Lady Lightning
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9 posted 2001-01-18 11:15 AM


Oops..I forgot to hit me save button...   ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

spiked
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10 posted 2001-01-18 09:37 PM


Thank you Seren, Tracie and LL. Was a very easy write for once.
Rich

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11 posted 2001-01-18 09:38 PM


Wonderfully said
spiked
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12 posted 2001-01-20 12:33 PM


Thank you Angel
Rich

Paula Finn
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13 posted 2001-01-20 03:46 AM


MMMMM the whole poem is so warm and tender and giving...I just like the thought of Touch me
spiked
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14 posted 2001-01-20 11:09 AM


Thank You Paula,
Rich

doreen peri
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15 posted 2001-01-20 11:19 AM


romantic, strongly written... i especially liked these lines,

"Remember me
I am more than a figment of your imagination"

... enjoyed this one much... thanks for the read

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