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Memory Loss |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Memories of days and nights we sinned fading like the whisper of the wind haunting shadows blurring what has been nevermore the feel of you within. Stars that glow less bright since love's rescind knowing nothing will come close again yet the whispers try to pull me in memories of love that should have been. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ohhhh, this touches my heart ever so softly......lovely write  -SEA |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is so beautiful Such a delight to read Fantastic write |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I love the title..i think some men suffer from it..if they only knew what they are missing..the treasure of love within our hearts and souls..what a pity..enjoyed hon ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Tenderly plaintive. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Beautifully penned Catalina... Thank you for the read... *~coco~* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You will one day find new memories that will shine even brighter. Wonderful write and very well presented in it's flow and content. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I wouldn't mind to lose those memories. . . beautiful Sandra. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love these memories......loved reading it. Charisma |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Catalina, The memories will always be there to hold on to. It's time to make some new ones...And I know you will. Love, Elise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes it should have been and some day it will be...when two hearts with the same desires meet...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Memories of days and nights we sinned fading like the whisper of the wind ================== Stars that glow less bright since love's rescind knowing nothing will come close again =========== Cat, I love this poems cadence and expression you have some very cool lines and vocabulary choices in this gem. very well done. take care jm When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very nice Cat. Rich |
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