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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Sometimes when no other words need to be spoken When I fall short of who I am suppose to be When life is on my shoulders and nothing in my day is going as planned and the nights seem to be long When I feel I can not do anything right and I fumble my words I want you you know that I Need You *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WONDERFUL!!! And so very sweet.......I see no fumbling  -SEA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiul flow, tender message! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Even though - 'no other words need to be spoken' I must say ... this is wonderful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Great write, greeneyes! Boy, do I know what you mean with this one! I really like this! sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Though the words may fumble the heart will stand up without fear. As always, you bring a beautiful write to share with us. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
You could say "I need you" out loud but the 'look' in your picture ought suffice. (would for me anyway) ~G~ Well done LC |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Greeneyes~ Indeed a delightful piece filled with lots of beauty....excellent read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Greeneyes... What a lovely poem... I too, certainly know what you're sayin' with this one.. Loved it, Hugs ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
take it from someone who falls short often ...  this is lovely ' sincere and soft ... well done poetess jm When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
spoken from the heart my friend. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Wonderful write my friend. i enjoyed the read. Love and light, Richard |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sea~ VAS~ Marge~ Thank you all, it was just one of those days/weeks at work.....It's nice to have a place, to come where I feel appreciated....Your comments mean much to me.... Greeneyes~ ***< !signature--> "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 01-19-2001).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
snowpants~ MarkB~ Bill~ thank you for relating to these words..... mark...your comments are always so appreciated...thank you much Bill....just the look in my eyes this week...*s* I had to return to work and leave my little one it was not fun...  but at the end of the day, Irealized just how much I love her, she greeted me with a big smile....thank you for always responding as you do.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
tracie66~ Lady Lightning~ Janet Marie~ tracie66, thank you for stopping in to read, and for telling me you enjoyed.... Lady Lightning It was a long week back at work....thanks for the hug, as they are always appreciated... hugs back to you...Janet Marie I, too, fall short....and its nice to have someone just hold ya and tell ya all is ok....thanks my poet friend for responding as you do... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Penned very well with a wonderful flow and thoughts. Boy, do I ever relate! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
beuatiful!!!!!!! Kathleen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Written from the heart Lauren...nicely done ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Aww this was sooo sweet....so cool! Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This was great, words that were wrote just perfect. Added to my library of writes. Bernie |
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