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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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wonder we wonder why love why eyes see eyes heart feels heart hand holds hand lips kiss lips listen ears listen mind knows mind spirit joins spirit feet dance feet why love why wonder we wonder ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow! I love the presentation - this is different than your usual style, but, it's an excellent technique. And I love the message  I'm sure many will relate to the question you seekTake care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Yes Sven definately WOW!!! I love this. -SEA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
  less is more well done |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
And I wonder as well. Beautiful. Samdra |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ The beauty in your words is always a gift I thank you for the gift of knowing you~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, Less is definitely more in this poem. Beautifully constructed and the questions? You penned them so perfectly. Write on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yes.. Wonder, we do... And sometimes its like we're trying to fool ourselves out of it doesn't it? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Well you've done it again. Enjoyed the read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, life is full of mysery, but only for a certain length of time until we stop wondering and just go with the flow. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven love, did not I say that you did brevity better than anyone else. Utterly wonderful love it truly is. So if less is more should I leave this space blank love? Noooooo I don't think so. Truly wonderful Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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