Open Poetry #12 |
Waiting. |
Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Waiting. Standing Patiently and anxiously Surrounded By harshness Of cold and icy Pains. Waiting! Shivering As the ice melts Slowly and silently Astounded Arms reach out With tenderness Of warmth and love. Smiling! Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DJD~ "Arms reach out With tenderness Of warmth and love." Very beautiful sentiments here, I loved this -SEA |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, Thank you so much. Oh how cold can heartaches be. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Much too cold, I agree -SEA |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
love this was glad it ended the way it did.. waiting CAN be rather harsh at times! hugs,g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, A smile goes a long way to ensure the recapture of love and affection. dvgarner, Thank you, yes the wait can be more painful. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
One small gesture can always carry love with it. This was wonderfully penned and it is packed with much emotion in such a short write. Loved the read. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Mark, Thank you so much for these kind words, they reflect your deep sense of care. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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