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SEA
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0 posted 2001-01-17 05:53 PM



When night falls
Softly
I hear you…….
As the wind blows gently through the trees
Softly
Memories caress my cheek
Trailing fingers of reminiscing along my neck
Softly
Allowing me the pleasure of your touch
Even though you aren't really there………but you are
Softly
Tears come, but not for sorrow
They come for love
Softly
Remembering you


~SEA~

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1 posted 2001-01-17 06:02 PM


SEA--I love this...its soft and soothing.  Beautiful write.

Poeminister

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-Plato

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PM~ thank you for always finding time to read my poetry....you make me smile, and that is wonderful to me, thank you  -SEA
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3 posted 2001-01-17 06:44 PM


Sea, I'm jealous...I should have written this! But I'm glad you did - that gave me the pleasure of reading it. Beautiful.

jwesley

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4 posted 2001-01-17 06:45 PM


Circe love, this is utterly wonderful, it truly is outstanding. On the understanding that less is indeed more, this is

            SUPERB

I really love this one and you know that I know  
Take care love
                   Mushy
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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5 posted 2001-01-17 06:53 PM




Now this has a beautiful flow!  

These lines were exceptional:

"memories caress my cheek
trailing fingers of reminiscing along my neck
softly
allowing me the pleasure of your touch
even though you aren't really there...but you are
softly"

Wow!

Take care,
Melissa


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



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6 posted 2001-01-17 06:56 PM


SEA,
I cannot compliment you enough for this beautifully spun web of softly intriguing words of love. You my dear friend is sparkle in my eyes as your poetry sends butterflies through me. Fantastic.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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7 posted 2001-01-17 06:59 PM


shhhhhhhhhhhhhh. . .

I'm listening. . .  

-----------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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8 posted 2001-01-17 07:00 PM


SEA~
You know our spirits touch on this subject -
What lovely moments of remember.

Yes - yes !
I like this very much.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2001-01-17 07:16 PM


JWesley~ funny, I ususally think the same thing when I read yours   thank you!  

Marsha~   thank you very much  

Melissa~ thank you, that is so nice!  

DJD~ butterflies through you......gosh, making me grin like a fool   thank you for that!!  

Sven~  

Marge~ yes, I like to think so   I'm so glad you liked this!  

-SEA

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10 posted 2002-03-28 06:23 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo soft and gorgeous, sweet friend, may love forever whisper softly to your ears and fill your heart with delight! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are sooooo romantic! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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11 posted 2003-01-27 11:29 AM


I feel this too
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