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Victoria
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0 posted 2001-01-17 05:03 PM


May I shower you with my kisses?
along your ears and upon your neck
a bubble cascading
your body, little pecks
I will take you upon a cruise
upon the promenade deck

Showering you with my kisses
across your collar bone my pet
necklace of kisses Mmm slightly wet
how do you feel so far?
about my sweet vignette

The balcony of jealous stars
like beacons in the night
binoculars of the spheres
upon our cabin of moonlight

Dancing waves of contentment
in the night, our cabaret
let me upon our pleasure cruise
be your moonflower bouquet


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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  






[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-17-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2001-01-17 05:29 PM


yuh uh huh uh huh i likes this alot
Sven
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2 posted 2001-01-17 07:11 PM


I have only one thing to say Victoria. . .

YES!!!!



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3 posted 2001-01-17 07:19 PM


Silky......Sensual.........Sensational   -SEA
Victoria
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4 posted 2001-01-17 09:04 PM


Thank you walt, sven, and sea..nice of you to peek in ..pleased you all enjoyed my little cruise haa..

              ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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5 posted 2001-01-17 09:05 PM


I loved this!!!

Kathleen


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6 posted 2001-01-17 09:47 PM


A little trip on the "Love Boat"?
Great fun, Vic
Sandra

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7 posted 2001-01-17 10:55 PM


thank you kathleen and sandra..so happy you enjoyed the love boat haa..
Do i have a man for you two to fight over haa..

                ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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8 posted 2001-02-25 06:03 PM


Victoria--I love this muchly
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