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Open Poetry #12

The Dark Side Of Love

Frankie
Member

since 2001-01-10

Posts 57

0 posted 2001-01-17 12:13 PM

Not holding hands as we walk through the park
Coming home to me late, well after dark.

Working too much, as if I didn't know
Never a dinner date, not even a show.

Yelling and screaming, its always a fight
Going to bed angry, no kiss goodnight.

Not looking into each others eyes, you see
The Dark Side Of Love Was Destined To Be.

Frankie

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2001-01-17 12:21 PM

This is very sad and if you are going thru this Im sorry for you...if you want or need to talk give a holler

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-01-17 01:11 PM

Frankie~ this is terribly sad.....I hope all is well with you

-SEA

Frankie
Member

since 2001-01-10

Posts 57

3 posted 2001-01-19 02:47 PM

Paula - Thanks for the read and yes it is very sad...thanks for the read.

SEA - Thank you and everything is looking up slowly and surely.

Frankie

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

4 posted 2001-01-19 02:52 PM

Truly sad when this happens, well penned!

Corinne

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

5 posted 2001-01-19 02:58 PM

Oh how I couldn't have said these words any better! Know it well, my friend, know it well. And I applaud you the courage to write it.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

6 posted 2001-01-19 03:03 PM

sounds more like the demise of love... maybe it's time for some romance... sometimes it's over, sometimes it's not... but when it gets to this point, a 4 day weekend changing the scenery with champagne, candlelight and poetry is a good idea... never hurts to make a suggestion.... *sigh*.... been there... 8 of the 9 years were like that... depressing...mine's over, though... *whew*... hope this isn't based on reality but if it is, pop the cork, light the candles and victoria's secret is always a good idea... LOL *wink*... thanks for the read

... best of luck and love to you...

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