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In This Corner His Grave
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In This Corner His Grave |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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In this corner the rock star In this corner his grave Let us have this fight begin Tell me who will be so brave The tambourine pounds my haunted past Veins are racing the rhythm fast All of us are in the final cast Turn out the lights if you are last I’d neglect my chance to sleep To ride the poet’s dream Close my eyes and I’m awake Nothing is, as it seems Sing me a song I’m a new man I’d like to shake your hand Bring me a woman if you can And baby you’re in the band Passion flows like a head-trip Passion flows from your lips Two red vipers from a snake pit Your passion I can’t forget Waking up hard on a Tuesday Thinking it must be all right To fall in love with a new girl Every single day of my life People channel people Liable to start suspicion Don’t stand near an open mind Flying apparition Solemn at the grave site Tears shed on my tomb Life, didn’t you love me? Drop me from your womb The couch can be a brave ride For the wife he can’t abide In this corner a rock star Or just a boy who likes to hide? I’ll sleep and I’ll dream I’ll cry and I’ll scream I’ll walk up and down The infinite seam I’ll be good I’ll behave I’ll be strong I’ll be brave I just want to stand From the bottomless grave For the stream of consciousness I would somehow hope to save Runs its course and falls into A watery sunken grave [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 01-17-2001).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
WOW!! THAT WAS COOL! ...really really enjoyed this one walt! and this was interesting: "Solemn at the grave site Tears shed on my tomb Life, didn’t you love me? Drop me from your womb" you filled this one with some awesome lines..awesome imagery.. to the private library with you!  hugs,g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walt~ this is very cool......... I loved this......... "I’d neglect my chance to sleep To ride the poet’s dream Close my eyes and I’m awake Nothing is, as it seems" -SEA |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
if you need a job, you should write for the CIA. quite intelligente! bottomless, sunken grave. the closed eyes and your awake thing is great. que tan maravilloso. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This was fascinating from beginning to end...what a concept and wonderfully written as always |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
trying to break on through |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Walty, this was a really interesting read buddy.... I’d neglect my chance to sleep To ride the poet’s dream Close my eyes and I’m awake Nothing is, as it seems can relate to this Wonderful Walty Maree |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent walt. . . I really liked this one from you. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ 'The tambourine pounds my haunted past Veins are racing the rhythm fast All of us are in the final cast Turn out the lights if you are last' Awesome, brother ! Awesome ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i wanted to say thankyou thankyou |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
Yes Walt get happy |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A roller coaster ride from beginning to end... with every verse a gem. *S* |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
elisa slap grin suthern thank you so much smiles |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you just go right ahead and find someone and fall in love!!! Kathleen |
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