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the raptured stair |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I call upon four-cornered wind, and whisper names of guardian a summons now I call to thee-- angels lend your ear to me. Fly low, fly low, you'll find me there... knees and elbow crawl despair... embattlement of self in spent clipped wings assured descent I summon all you've my consent-- ascend, Ascend, the Raptured stair. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
thank goodness for those angel wings! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This has the feel of an incantation..I love your work my friend.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Fly low, fly low, you'll find me there... knees and elbow crawl despair... embattlement of self in spent clipped wings assured descent ============== again I say...your so cool it hurts baby  I love your candle dance rhymes lovie ... and you know Im relating to this gem... me thinks me wings are singed not clipped tho flying low into the flame ..yeah you know... very cool poem me twin me When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I need some wings to fly this day for in the depths, I seem to stray your poems are very well done, serenity I have been remiss for not responding much, but between headaches and this flu or whatever it is that has it's hold on me, I have only been reading, when I can...mostly to bring in some lighter thoughts. huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Wow!!! I love the feel of this ...  Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Anyone tell you today you have a way with words? No? Then let me be the first.... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
we need to start a girl boy band o yuh!! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Serenity, I Love the title and this flows beautifully. As alwayws, wonderful writing. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I can hear this being chanted in unison. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ Fantastic.......comepletely fantastic!! -SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Irish? Those wings have been all that was between me and the ground many a time...hugs to you! Sharon--anyone ever tell you, you one smart lady? grin... Janet--I thought it was time to put the magic back in my man! LOL and hugs... Wynter--sorry you are not well...thank you for taking the time to read...we'll catch up soon--as soon as the warden here goes back to work that is...sigh... Pepper...thank you Karilea...still love your name, you ever hear Elton John's song "amorena"--well you could replace her name with yours...so musical...thank you, as always walt...okay, but we need a really good name...The P.i.p.s---maybe Gladys Knight would be interested? lol hugs and thanks... Poe...thank you as always sweet one, haven't been reading as much lately...hope to catch up soon. Sven...good, good, I only hope my intention was clear too...thank you! Sea---thanks and hugs, and to you as well, hope to catch up on my reading this weekend... HUGS TO FORUM...and now, back to the show! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
great expression here SweetSerenity... I enjoyed this read bearrrrrrrrrrry much... Hugs2uPoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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