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A Touch Of Realization
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A Touch Of Realization |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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Velvet green resting behind the waterfall mist moss hugs rock tightly ~~*~~ Infinities touch in droplets of a thousand waterfall's massage ~~*~~ Fire dipping it's toes in nightly batheing event sunset calls the night ~~*~~ Frame by frame sequence unfolding in dawn's silence rosepetals blossom Mark Bohannan |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Mark....these haiku's are wonderful...love them.....yeah I love the touch of realization inhere. (((hugs)) Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellent writing! They're all so well done! The pictures painted are filled with the beauty of reality! Great job Mark! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Mark, this is glorious color of nature and the ending. wow. I loved this from beginning to finish! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Sweetie, these are just lovely. *Hugs* your way ! I love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
These are so special, as is the poet. The last one will stay engraved in my heart. Liz |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
continue to thank a poet whose paper pen touches with delight beautiful |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh you've got the touch allright ... everytime you touch pen to paper ... poetic magic happends.... you already know I love these and why so I dont need to say... besides it would take way more than 5-7-5 syllables to tell ya  way cool MC...and yes...definatly GROOVY  When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Charisma-Thank you my friend. I think if we all took the time to realize all the beauty that God puts before every day then life would slow down a bit and more smiles could be found. ethome-Thank you very much sir. I am glad that you could see the pictures. Kathleen-Thank you so much. I too am partial to the last one. Marge-Thank you my friend for always being you. Liz-Well that makes three of us that like the last one best. Thank you much my friend. Karilea-Thank you for the wonderful senyru in reply JM-If they warrant your "groovy" then I know you liked them. Thanks sweetness, now go eat some "HEALTHY" breakfast for a change.  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, wonderfully written picturetts, absolutely beautifully painted portaits here. Such visual images that bathe the reader in delight, truly delightfull piece, Terrifically presented Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Peaceful and serene images..lovely poem Mark ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ these are simply beautiful.....almost sensual in a way.....enjoyed these very much -SEA |
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krysalis Junior Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 22 |
Not only is this artistic in a poetic sense... but artictic to the eye. The color schemes per verse... matching the words... what genius!!!!!! I enjoyed this one ALOT! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful images. My favorite is the second one. Excellent penning. Poeminister |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marsha-Thank you. I am glad you found them delightful. Victoria-Peaceful and serene works for me. Thank you much. SEA-Thank you very much my friend. One of God's ways of showing us his heart is all that he surrounds us with. krysalis-Thank you so much. Color can often add another dimension to all in life. Poeminister-How could one not like a waterfall. Thank you so much. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
absolutely wonderful haikus friend - keepers for sure |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Velvet green resting behind the waterfall mist moss hugs rock tightly ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I missed this beauty. Not sure which verse is my favorite, but it's always a pleasure to read your poems. Deb |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
indeed,lovely....what love comes from your heart and into the mind of every reader it reaches....wonderful my friend... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, Mark, and your pieces are as frame by frame the world at days ending. Beautiful! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your words always have a way of touching our hearts Mark. Exceptional Haikus. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. Donna Smith |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Big Brother, You do have such a wonderful gift for Haiku, and these are like jewels in the sun!! What a pleasure to read.......  ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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