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pharon
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0 posted 2001-01-17 02:57 AM



snow crunches, forming new tracks
in the seemingly virgin snow.
how many have tread here before?
how many will tread here after?

these footprints, like souls, live on
past the grave reality of death,
lasting beyond the snow that melts
under the influence of the sun.

one footprint after thousands,
one before thousands more;
all making eternal imprints
withstanding time and season.

© Copyright 2001 maria g robinson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-18 01:01 AM


This is amazing.....how did this go to page 5 without anyone seeing this?! Well, to the top you go!  -SEA
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2 posted 2001-01-19 05:28 PM


it was back on page 5 again so I'm booting it up! Very nice images.
pharon
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3 posted 2001-01-19 11:01 PM


hey...thanx for responding, and booting me back to the top - twice.  i guess not many people liked this one...but in a final attempt i'll put it back to the top again..maybe someone else will read it  

       pharon

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