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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Silk-Spun  ~*Marge Tindal*~ Latticed lace of lure Eyelet enticement suspends Delicate webbing ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this is wonderful even if I am terrified of spiders  -SEA |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
"lace of lure" whatcha spinning there Marge? Wonderful Words here....  Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I love it Poeminister |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Beautiful haiku, Marge! You have captured the magic work of art of a web very well here! Very well weaved masterpiece! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely weave of web, Marge. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yeppers........she is out to captivate the world with her "delicate" key to the natural beauties of life. (and she does it marvelously I might add) [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 01-17-2001).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Awesome Marge, I'm smiling... coco |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
loved the alliteration effect in the first line |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge latticed lace in haiku write alliteration gave it flight. Loved this! Tooo much! write on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is truly awesome, utterly wonderful as always you inspire me Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderfully descriptive Marge ... you are sooooo good at these, loved it! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful.....and beautiful haiku. love your weaving webbing words. (((hugs)) Charisma |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge will rapture you Please beware her capture glue Woven for you Great one' Liz |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
the poor little thing is just trying to survive! I love this graphic.< !signature--> [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 01-17-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ I'm really pleased to know you liked it, hon. GreenEyes~ LOL ! Just an innocent observer ! PoeMinister~ Thanks.MistleToeAngel~ Appreciate the compliments. Martie~ Thanks, hon. *Hugs* MarkB~ *kiss* Dani~ Me too ! Kaile~ Thank you for noticing. Kethry~ Muchly appreciated, love. Marsha~ Just as I was inspired to write it ~ may it catch you in it's webbing. Kit~ Awww ! How nice - thank you. Charisma~ Thank you, doll. Elizabeth~ What a sweetie you are. Thanks, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Wow! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Purtily penned.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, I'm caught in the lure That the enticement suspends Held in the webbing. *L* Sy |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent!!!!! Fine gossimer threads Tight weaved and interlocking Spider's masterpiece ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doreen~ Awwww ! I'll bet you say that to everybody ! Karilea~ Thankee ! Seymour~ What a treat, my friend. GREAT reply ! HootieGal~ Good show ! Thanks muchly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
WOW! Marge, this is a phenomenal haiku! What a great graphic to go with it. Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Thank you so much. As a rootin' tootin' lover of the Senryu/Haiku ... I'm glad you liked it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully spun, Marge!! (another one that I missed when I was sick) Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thanks, gal. Don't be getting sick ANY more ! It's always nice to know you've read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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