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Crystal Teal
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Crystal Teal |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Crystal Teal Spoken softly breath of life white fog velvet dew one drop from a glass stem a crystal teal rose you floated to my palm I caught my breath I catch it still shimmering in your light Robert Joseph ~enb~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it Robert..and the title..enchanting  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"you floated to my palm I caught my breath I catch it still shimmering in your light" Beautiful descriptions and imagery, my friend. Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RJ~ Delicately enchanting. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
RJ, this is stunning, so much said in so little words I enjoyed Maree |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This poem has caught my breath in its delicate beauty. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Superbly written and filled with much delicate beauty. This one is a keeper for sure. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Perfection... That's what I think of your poem I have had the pleasure to read this eve... Thank you *~coco~* |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Victoria LoveBug Marge Martie Maree Mark CoCo Thanks everyone, each reply is valued and appreciated! Robert Joseph |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This....peals, then peels forth slowly and blossoms into excellence... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RJ~ this is gorgeous -SEA |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Sunshine, and Sea... Thanks so much, your replies are a pleasure to receive. Robert Joseph |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
The imagery you've captured with your words is beautiful..well done! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Had to come back to add to my library...thank you!... |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Rascalx, Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it. Sunshine, thanks again, its nice to be appreciated. Robert Joseph |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, lovely metaphor, Robert! |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Thanks VAS, I'm pleased to know you enjoyed it so well. Robert Joseph |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
as beautiful now, as when I first read it. *ftd* |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I think Victoria caught it with her enchanting...hope you don't mind but I have to show another person this and say 'and this is how I feel...' Hugs RJ K |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Neve, each day I thank God ~ek~ Robert Joseph ~enb~ ********************** Hi, ''K'' Nice to hear from you again, I'm pleased to know you enjoyed it. Robert Joseph |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This I love! I will save this in my library as a favorite! Deb |
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