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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-01-16 09:30 PM


Melt
By: Noah Eaton
1/16/01
Melt with me, my love
Let our hearts melt into one
Let us never feel lonely or shy again
When we are together as one, in total comfort instead

Melt into my eyes
I want to see you, I want to love you all my life
Hold me, take me, let me be by your side
May we forever be together, for all time

Melt into my dreams
Let us sleep at night peacefully
Happy knowing our searches are complete
As we are in each others arms, dreaming of each other, happily

Melt into my body
Embrace me with your soft warm body, attached to me
Let me feel the softness of your lips, the silkiness of your skin
Melt with me in the heat of our love, a love that will never dim

Melt into my heart
Feeling comfortable that we’ll never again be apart
I love you, you are my dream…
Melt with me



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1 posted 2001-01-16 09:41 PM


"I'll stop the world and melt with you"- Modern English

Romantic poem, made me think of the song above.........love it!   -SEA

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2 posted 2001-01-16 09:46 PM


'Melt into my eyes
I want to see you, I want to love you all my life
Hold me, take me, let me be by your side
May we forever be together, for all time'

Beautiful write, Noah!  I love it!

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I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

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3 posted 2001-01-16 11:23 PM


Thank you both for your wonderful comments, they fill me with such confidence and hope!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-01-16 11:32 PM


sounds hot, Mistletoe...wonderful write!

Nathan

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5 posted 2003-01-27 12:06 PM


Noah...you've always had it! I hope you keep it forever
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6 posted 2003-02-23 10:16 PM


A most delightful read PoetFriendNoah...
Hugs2u
*~coco~*

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