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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 2001-01-16 07:58 PM



In yesterday's dreams
I could see you
Though I never
Knew your name
Could feel the love
That was there for the giving
Though I could never
See your face

In that dream
You walked into my life
And you stole
My heart away
You took it from me
And put it away
To a place
Where it was safe

Today I learned
That with just a little faith
Tht dreams
Can come true
Of all the things
I have in my life
I'm luckiest
To have you

~~For Beth~~
I love you!!

© Copyright 2001 Jeffrey D. Carter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-16 08:02 PM


This is so special..........what a beautiful loving poem! She'll love this........ -SEA
Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-01-16 09:15 PM


Just lovely Jeffrey ... happiness and love shines beautifully through these lines. It's great to read you again!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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3 posted 2001-01-16 09:17 PM


(sigh) Oh, how romantic! She's a very lucky girl, dear one, to share a beautiful heart such as yours! May true love forever flourish between you and your love! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Jeffrey Carter
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4 posted 2001-01-17 10:08 AM


She read this before it was posted and yes she did love it....and I love her with all that I am  

Thanks for the wonderful replies

Nate Dogg
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5 posted 2001-01-17 10:13 AM


Ahh, this is sweet Jeffery....a wonderful write!

Nathan

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6 posted 2001-01-17 10:15 AM


wonderful!  full of simple happiness!
Good to see you, Jeffrey!




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7 posted 2001-01-17 10:48 AM


Oh Jeffery this is so Romantic. I wish you the best in your happiness. May the light of Love shine upon the two of you.
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8 posted 2001-01-29 08:12 AM


You sure can write 'em jeffrey.  Bittersweet.

Kay-lynn
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9 posted 2001-01-29 08:32 AM


a beautiful poem, I liked it, AP
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