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Burning Fire |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
 Burning Fire A spark of your love touches my heart Without your kisses it's torn apart The warm hugs you give squeeze my soul You’re my burning fire you make me whole To lie by your side makes my love for you real Your love's a burning fire and that's what I feel Your flicker in my heart brightens my day A crackling of love in every way This flame, my love, my burning fire Sweet kisses, warm hugs, fulfill my desire Your spark in my heart has grown to a flame From cold heart to a spark, burning fire it became [This message has been edited by insect (edited 01-16-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Insect~ This is so wonderful........wish the hubby could say things like this......*sigh*  -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Insect~ Very soothing to watch the fire glow through your words. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I can feel the heat right through the screen Insect! Wonderful words of love and desire ... very well done, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your spark in my heart has grown to a flame From cold heart to a spark, burning fire it became ==================== VERY COOL!! actually its canned heat  poetic heat ... very romantic great to see you posting again later-on fire-gator jm When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Beautiful, lovely, passionate poem! May that pure flame of love forever burn in you and your love! (sigh) Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nice of you to stop by and share your poetry with us insect..nicely written indeed ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A heated love poem, insect. I enjoyed it much! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Fiery piece, insect....terrific write! Nathan |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
'bout time you came and gave us one of your specials. This was truely wonderful and carries much sentiment and heart with it. Great read. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
INSECT, this is real sweet... I enjoyed your poem and in my library4future reads this shall go... *~coco~* |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, a little different in style for you. Gonna get all the ladies smiling. Good one. James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
can feel the heat, love it. Charisma |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Burning Fire SEA Thank you The way you write about him I don't think much more then just a smile from him and your knees will get weak. I'm sure when your in just his presence you *sigh It's wonderful to read the love you are going through I may have written Burning Fire but you are proof that it exists. Marge Tindal Thanks my friend You can put a spark in any heart Kit McCallum Thank you Kit Very nice to see you always Janet Marie Thank you Janet Do you have an opener So nice to have you here Mistletoe Angel Thank you friend Us guys need a burning fire of a love So do the women too because two flames burning together make an inferno of firelove that will burn for eternity Victoria Thank you Victoria Very happy to burn a flaming poem for you LoveBug Thank you Wonderful to see a Lovebug in here *wink *wink Nate Dogg Thanks very much Glad you enjoyed Mark Bohannan Thanks Mark Always good to get your replies friend CocaBaci Thank you That’s wonderful of you to do that Smiling now! Haleyja Thanks What do you mean…They got me smiling! Charisma Thank you With all this heat in here we may have to call the fire department! Glad you stopped in to get warmed up. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Insect~ yes, he smiles at me and I'm a school girl again.....blushing and giggling, but then, I've known him since I was 14 years old.....  he just doesn't talk too mushy gushy for me.......but he cuts wood, builds sheds, takes the kids fishing, puts in a new kitchen floor for me.....that kind of stuff....he shows his love every day.......that matters to me. Hugs sweetie~ SEA |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Insect~ Oh this is fantastic, great write of your burning love....I enjoyed ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Burning Fire SEA~for you Lois He's the man in your life He made you his wife You've loved him forever This love will never sever He may not be gushy and mushy, however He builds this, fixes that, no doubt he's clever The way he loves you brings a flutter to your eyelids The way he loves you he shows it with the kids You sparkle whenever he's around His voice mesmerizes as you melt to the sound You've become his biggest fan He is your Superman tracie66 Thank you Most glad that you came in to say a nice word or two so again… I thank you |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I kept trying to figure out how you got Lois from Susan LOL now I get it.........and sweetheart, you hit the nail on the head......I call him my Superman (true, I swear)Thank you for this -SEA |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Lois It's nice to hear that you and Superman hold an eternal flame for each other |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Oohh...This must be that burning fire you were speaking of. Beautiful fire in your fireplace, dear sir. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Oohh...This must be that burning fire you were speaking of. Beautiful fire in your fireplace, dear sir. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'A spark of your love touches my heart Without your kisses it's torn apart The warm hugs you give squeeze my soul You’re my burning fire you make me whole' Absolutely beautiful and romantic! I love this! sp  Never leave me, never go... I need you here, I need to know... You will always be Close to me |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
 May the fires of love burn evermore This was beautiful, so full of passion and hope! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Burning Fire Temptress Yes would you like to cuddle? Thank you snowpants The fire of love is beautiful Thank you Melissa Honeybee Yes! Thank you for that burning reply Romance is the passion of a burning fire |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
HOT Kathleen |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
like this much |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Burning Fire Irish Rose Ya! Flaming Hot! Thank you vandana Much thanks And for the smile |
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