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Letting Go
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Letting Go |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Letting Go When all instincts say to hang on tight there comes a point when letting go makes all the sense in the world. Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ahh Robert B ... you have always had the gift for saying it all so well in so few wise words... very cool...very true.... now if it only it was as easy to do... take care jm |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks Janet.....I hope the gift of few words was inherited from my grandpa. He said little but meant a lot. Sometimes a relationship is like water skiing....if you fall off your skis you have to let go of the rope or risk being pulled under and drowned. I let go and lived to write about it. Robert |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
WOW..short and sweet and to the point..loved it Robert..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
 }I thought you would Vic. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice poem |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
yes... and of course someone will have to mention this..so let it be me: "if you love something, set it free....." you know the rest.. great thoughts robert.. hugs,g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I like short replies too Vandana!!! dg....I never heard of that...."if you love something let it loose???" }Robert |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I know what you mean........very well said! -SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Such truth in this. Nicely penned. Poeminister |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Whoa. You've said it so perfectly in just a few lines! Excellent write! sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very well expressed sir...thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Perfect example of wisdom in writing! I congratulate you! That good old gut feeling is sometimes a stomach ache isn't it!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I agree for if they care not to stay with you they will soon make your life miserable so let go and let it be...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I was just told the other day...that same idea as others are replying, adding that why would I want someone who is unhappy to stay with me...no matter what or how he dissolved his feelings... truth sometimes finally wins over hurt ~Wynter * and of course I am hearing constantly..* you have to get on with your life..yet it always comes from those who never had to go through it....seems I am a bit whiney this morning Robert *s "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
relating.... |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Oh I liked this. Going to pass this along to a friend. She needs these words of wisdom. Thank-you |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Gosh...such a short poem yet so many replies..... Who said size matters??? wow...I can't see all the replies in in my reply...so I now forget who replied....Ummmm Irish Rose...thank you....Wynter I hope it all works out..... jmlee?? thanks too. Natedogg...goodness I am dizzy here.... Boy I hate it when my reply window does not let me see all who replied. Robert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RobertB~ Oh, gosh ... I like this ! Sometimes ya' just gotta free-fall ! *wink* Check your e-mail. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Robert! But of course! Denise |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thank you Marge!!!! You showed me the way Baby!! Denise....of course what??? hehehe Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Yep short an right to the point. Very well said Mr.B and a BIG AMEN to that. Mr.Magoo |
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artsygrl Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 55Florida |
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! and Amen !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Nicely written, Bernie More can be less,,, and sometimes less can mean more.. < !signature--> [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Just a thought, even though you let something go do you truly ever let it go in your mind? I know very philosophical. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Nicely penned my friend... *~coco~* |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Just add me to this long list and ditto what the others have already said... < !signature-->Hugs..~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I thank all for your response. I had a lengthy reply to all of you but it seems that my password works when it wants to. So.....I type too slow to do it all again!!!! aaarrrgghhh Robert |
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