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0 posted 2001-01-16 03:45 PM


Swift, sweet day-snow dreams
Soft, white, crystal flakes of lace
Melt on sunny face



© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-16 03:49 PM


BIG BIG smiles here........ -SEA
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2 posted 2001-01-16 03:58 PM


"crystal flakes of lace"  --I love that description...beautiful image.

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3 posted 2001-01-16 05:19 PM


It is snowing here right now..
loved this snow ku Sunshine  

                ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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4 posted 2001-01-17 01:15 PM


you ever taste a snowflake??

that's what this reminded me of. . .  

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5 posted 2001-01-17 01:27 PM


enchanting.  
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6 posted 2001-01-17 01:35 PM


snowy smile overhere.....love it.

((hugs))
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7 posted 2001-01-17 01:40 PM


Thank you all for helping me keep the moment...
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8 posted 2001-01-17 01:51 PM


lets stand together - and see who can catch the most flakes on our tongue!
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9 posted 2001-01-17 08:57 PM


LOL...and who's going to do the counting?...
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