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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-01-16 11:58 AM





Seekest Me in Thy Soul

Dark light of shadows, render not thy shade this day
not in day, not by cloud nor shade of tree nor shade of thee
but rather, Sire, seek me, seek me in thy soul…

O sweet dark, sweeter thee than shall admit, do submit
in this day, move the cloud, see the sun, see in thee
sweet, sweet light, to vary shadows, but cast in bright

for in Cimmerian dusk, even thy voice is faintly gone
but by light of Ra and ray, the chorus is clear and strong
so would thee not want to seek thy song in this light….

for in thy soul I would reside, in thy breath of word
for to seek light by darkest of thy night, a candle bright is heard
by word of joy “See! The light!” should thee seek me in thy soul…

that this shimmer of life, true light, sunder shadows in the night


01.16.01



© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 2001-01-16 12:02 PM


..in this day, move the clouds, see the sun..

Yes, we are lucky here to have our own special rays of Sunshine to drive away the clouds!! This shall now enter my library!!  


Write on!
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angelswing
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2 posted 2001-01-16 12:04 PM


Thus even as our love depart,
This candle brigtest burn,
Through darkest midst,
And hour black,
My back shalst never turn .

Thankyou very much a truely inspirational poem, from a truely inspirational poet, glad you wrote it, I enjoyed reading it .
L.of.L. Tom .



Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
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SEA
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3 posted 2001-01-16 12:10 PM


Sunshine~ I love this style of writing.....wish I could do it!   beautiful   -SEA
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4 posted 2001-01-16 12:15 PM


Kari love, (My Kari not the other Kari!) What can I say.
             Beautiful
                     utterly
                            utterly
                                beautiful
                  





Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Poeminister
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5 posted 2001-01-16 01:03 PM


Our lady Sunshine
unto us does impart
rays so bright-divine
light that reflects together
aglow inspiro-her Sol of Passion
darkness melts away in her aura
yellow, golden, zenithal
she beteems vivid colour
uplifting us with her camena
nuances of heart enlightened
shining 'pon the pages of caeli
her words are eloquentia
illuminating th' horizon
nurturing things into music
enveloping us in love

Sunshine,
You write with sweetest Light.  Beautifully penned.

Poeminister


"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato




[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-16-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-01-16 01:16 PM


indeed in thy soul shalt one find
words of love and life
for in thy soul are words so kind
words of life and love

Lady Sunshine, thou hast indeed penned an excellent poem, remining us again where love is to truly be found. . .

Most wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

CocoBaci
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7 posted 2001-01-16 01:43 PM


Such grace and beauty is in this poem you write...
Thank you SUNSHINE...
*~coco~*

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8 posted 2001-01-16 01:56 PM


Sunny1, how much fun to visit your library, thank you!...

Tom, thank you for your kind words...

but SEA, you can....I know you can....I believe...[clapping hands...]...

Marsha, a double double curtsey to you sweet one....thank you....

Poeminister, I am stunned...this... this is graciously beautiful, and I stand before you humbled, in awe, and amazed....and I doubt that I shall ever be able to give you the thanks you so deserve....so please know you have put a smile on my lips...and a glow in my heart...this is truly kind of you....thank you for your time and most lovely gesture....

Sven...we can pull the covers over our head...but still the light peeks in through our eyelashes....thank you!....

Ah Coco...thank YOU....

PoeticKnight
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9 posted 2001-01-16 03:42 PM


One word "    "....Never mind, I'm speechless.
Sunshine
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10 posted 2001-01-16 04:16 PM


PK...you are too kind...I know that feeling very well...thank you...
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