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SEA
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0 posted 2001-01-16 09:53 AM



He is my laughter......to bring light to my day
Ever constant friend and confidant
The one I run to for safety………….acceptance………….reassurance
He is my best friend
~*~

He is my fire…………………..unextinguishable
Ever burning in my heart………….in my soul
The one who kindles my passion………ignites my desire
He is my lover

~*~

He is my match…………..in every way
Ever challenging me to keep in stride
The one who knows me…………..completely
He is my soul mate

~*~

He is my partner…………….for all my life
Ever gentle………..loving…………..giving
The one I trust completely, as I have no other
He is my husband


My everything

~SEA~


[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 01-16-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-01-16 09:56 AM


and HE is one lucky guy....
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2 posted 2001-01-16 09:57 AM


Oh, how I love this poem of devotion to your man, your best friend, your husband!  It is so wonderful to have that kind of love in a lifetime......many best wishes to you both!!


Write on!
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3 posted 2001-01-16 10:00 AM


you are one lucky lady!
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4 posted 2001-01-16 10:09 AM


and HE has been inspiring some lovely poetry in you ...
me thinks your both very lucky ...
love ya in love Sea-girlie
this is sincere and sweet
later-found your soulmate-gator
jm

baby can I hold you tonite ...
maybe if I said the right words, at the right time ...
you'd be mine.
baby can I hold you tonite.
~tracy chapman~

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5 posted 2001-01-16 10:10 AM


Beautiful sentiments from a heart that has known the trials before the reward.  Wonderful penning and even more wonderful show of love.
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6 posted 2001-01-16 10:17 AM


Sunshine~   thank you

Sunny1~ it's pretty great, thank you  

Phoenix~ thank you  

Janet~ yea, he has a way about him that inspires me......he is one of a kind   thank you!

Mark~ yes, the trials were brutial......the rewards, beautiful......thank you dear man  

~SEA

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7 posted 2001-01-16 10:30 AM


liked it
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8 posted 2001-01-16 10:38 AM


Circe love, You knew I'd love this I know, utterly wonderful. As always seeing how wonderfully you love your partner has me smiling delightedly for you love. This is truly a wonderfully excellant piece.
Take care love
                Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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9 posted 2001-01-16 11:15 AM


Eloquentia perfecta.  

Poeminister

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Vandana~ thank you  

Marsha~   you are so sweet, thank you  

PM~ I'm so glad you liked this   thank you  

-SEA

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11 posted 2001-01-16 12:18 PM


This is a beautiful tribute to your husband. You and he both are truly blessed to share that kind of love.
Wonderful poem.
Deb

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Deb~ thank you, I read it to him last night, just after writing it and he loved it   -SEA
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13 posted 2001-01-17 12:17 PM


This is beautiful, SEA.  I'm looking for poems appropriate to read at my wedding/use in the programs.  I'd love to include this in my ceremony.  Please email if you are interested.
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14 posted 2001-01-17 12:44 PM


SEA, I adore the way you write of the inner feelings of devotion you possess and share towards your loving hubby...

ThankU sweetie I enjoyed your poem...
*~coco~*

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15 posted 2001-01-17 11:27 AM


Tara~   I emailed you........Thank you  

Coco~   thank you, it's easy when he is as magical as my hubby  

-SEA

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16 posted 2001-01-17 02:47 PM


The magic is clearly expressed in the loving words you have written....just beautiful

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

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Thank you Pepper!!   -SEA
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18 posted 2001-01-17 10:16 PM


SEA,
He... has to be the happiest person on earth. Because your love is real.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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19 posted 2001-01-17 10:17 PM


SEA,
He... has to be the happiest person on earth. Because your love is real.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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20 posted 2001-01-17 10:22 PM


My opinion? - TWO (2) very lucky people:
You have each other! - He's got the best of the deal - he's got a poet too~G~

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21 posted 2001-01-17 10:23 PM


....the dream we all dream of...how wonderful that youve captured it!    

very sweet write for your dream come true  

hugs, g


"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens

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22 posted 2001-01-17 10:56 PM



What a beautiful dedication to your husband, you are both so blessed!  I long for a love like yours.  You must submit this for the next passions "Voices On The Web" Book!     Or perhaps you could submit this poem to the main site for the world to read!  Have you given this to him yet?  What a treat it would be for him to receive this poem for valentines day!

Take care,
Melissa
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The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams




[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 01-17-2001).]

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23 posted 2001-01-18 12:09 PM


I hope you always love him as you do now..he must be a very special man..nicely written Sea..HUGS..



             ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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24 posted 2001-01-18 12:23 PM


DJD~ He is well loved and he knows it!   thank you  

WY~ I feel very lucky, he says he does too.... thank you  

Dg~ I had to wait a very long time and go through some bad times until this dream came true......it was worth it!   thanks  

Melissa~ he's out there waiting to find you.....it'll happen.....thank you, he brings out the best in me....yes, I read it to him just after I wrote it....I'll have to come up with something else for Valentine's Day   thank you

Victoria~ he is, and I have loved him for 16 years......intensely......this love will never die, thank you  

-SEA

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