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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2001-01-16 04:21 AM


I RAGE AGAINST FATE
AND I SCREAM OUT YOUR SWEET NAME
BUT NOBODY HEARS

© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
tracie66
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1 posted 2001-01-16 04:27 AM


Paula~
It's hard I know and it really hurts like hell and nothing I can say will ease your pain hon but know that I am here and I hear you....Let it all out
~HUGS~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Ethan Halo
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2 posted 2001-01-16 05:16 AM


now THIS i can relate to. this i like. very smooth.
"shots in the dark are from empty guns, never heard by anyone"
awesome work on this one.

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.


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3 posted 2001-01-16 09:14 AM


Powerful and full of heartache, hugs to you  - SEA
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4 posted 2001-01-16 09:19 AM


Paula love, I'm there right there with you. Shout all you wish love. This is so powerful dear heart. Take care always
                Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



dgvarner
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5 posted 2001-01-16 09:28 AM


oh paula..... *sigh*     i know i'm not the one you want to hear..but i hear you...deeper than you know...

i ache with only a portion of your pain as i read..but i share it with you and hope it eases the feeling..just a bit...    i know it hurts so much to lose one you love...

"into every life a little rain must fall...and losing one you love is like a storm...but storms are passing..."  michael w. smith

hugs to your heart my friend..g


"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens

Sunnyone
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6 posted 2001-01-16 10:16 AM


Rage has to be turned loose, and screaming is the best way.  When your throat is sore, and you can't scream any longer, than your heart will heal.......and we will be here for you, my twin.....


Write on!
-<--<--{(@



CocoBaci
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7 posted 2001-01-16 01:36 PM


Paula, you're in my thoughts PoetFriend...
Hugs2u
*~coco~*

Paula Finn
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8 posted 2001-01-20 04:45 AM


Tracie...thank you for your love and concern

Ethan...well Im not sure if relating is a good thing or not thanks

Sea...thanks for the hugs they are most welcome

Marsha...and you being here has kept me sane thanks just isnt enough

dgvarner...it does help knowing someone hears this pain...thank you

Sunny girl...I know you are here my twin and that helps thanks

Coco..thank you so much



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9 posted 2001-01-20 12:49 PM


Oh Paula, you know I have been there, and sometimes screaming is the only way to let out the pain.
Take care, I understand.
Sandra

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10 posted 2001-01-20 01:47 PM


Oh, I can feel the pain in here! It is sad when you feel lost, and you just have to scream a cry for help in order to have someone finally notice your pain. I've been through this all the time. But fear not, love and light overcomes all, and love will be the medicine that heals the heartache. Excellent haiku, thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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11 posted 2001-01-20 02:04 PM


yes, you said it.  Someone to hear the pain, that's it, that's it, that's all we can do, if we scream and no one hears how can we help anyone?

I'm going to post a poem for you I hope you don't mind.


Kathleen



Paula Finn
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12 posted 2001-01-21 05:54 AM


Sandra...yes I know you know...and Ive screamed til my throat is raw...and still I rage

Noah...its not the feeling of being lost...its what I lost that causes the pain...thank you

Irish Rose...your poem was lovely and very comforting and again I thank you for your love and concern

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