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CocoBaci
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0 posted 2001-01-16 02:22 AM


The First Time

She encountered different gents
On the carousel of merriment
Some offering precious treasures
Others bouquets of kind gesture
Still she found herself at loss
And for the first time she yearned love...

In the memories once known as gold
Empty shadows dominate thoughts of alone
Until she met him then her life took a twirl
And for the first time she acquainted love...

His song of heart was like melody of child
When gazing at joviality of carnival clowns
His lips a whisper of passionate bliss
Capturing her essence in magical kiss
And for the first time she enraptured love...

His likeness was the season autumn
With hair in hues of brown and gold
His words spoken like breeze refreshing
Unfolding dreams of infinite pleasure
And at the rise of each morning dawn
She would awaken reminiscing love
*~coco~*







[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-17-2001).]

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Sunnyone
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1 posted 2001-01-16 02:28 AM


~~~ Coco ~~~
This is truly beautiful and I am touched by not only the poem, but the graphic as well!!
But then, you knew I would be, didn't you?!!  
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Write on!
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Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-01-16 02:39 AM


Dani~
Positively breathtaking !
~*Marge*~


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CocoBaci
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3 posted 2001-01-16 02:50 AM



SUNNY1... I am elated you appreciated this post and you know I'm smiling just knowing you got enjoyment from reading this...

MARGE, my sweetest thanks 2u for your treasured words I always hold dear...

Hugs2U2
*~coco~*

tracie66
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4 posted 2001-01-16 04:39 AM


Coco~
An absolute devine write honey bun   well done, I love it
~HUGS~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2001-01-16 06:50 AM


Beautiful Coco ... you've captured the romance in all it's splendor, very nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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6 posted 2001-01-16 09:40 AM


Coco~ this is perfectly gorgeous and headed directly to my library! Wow....just love this!   -SEA
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7 posted 2001-01-16 10:34 AM


enjoy the read
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8 posted 2001-01-16 12:08 PM


Very beautiful Coco...
BloomingRose
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9 posted 2001-01-16 12:32 PM


Wow! Stunning. Reads like the beginning of a great novel.
The graphic is beautiful too.
Deb

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10 posted 2001-01-16 12:48 PM


Coco,
Sweet is sweet and
Honey is honey but this
Is right on the money.

Enjoyed, Sy

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11 posted 2001-01-16 12:55 PM


PoetFriend Coco, this is indeed another beautiful poem from your pen. . . wonderful. . .



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CocoBaci
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12 posted 2001-01-16 02:25 PM


Tracie, Thank you my friend for your sweetness in reply

KIT, I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this poem it's always a treat to have you stop by and learn you enjoyed the poem

SEA, Your reply is adorable sweetie and I thank you once again for stopping by

VANDANA, Thank you so much for the kind response and I appreciate you taking the time to reply

PAULA, Hugs2uSweetie and thank you for your kindness and sharing of your heart

BLOOM, It's a different format of write for me and I'm especially glad you found it an enjoyable read

SEYMOUR, You're too kind PoetFriend and I smile at your charming reply

SVEN, MyFriend ya know there's so much to be thankful for and to know that you enjoyed this poem inspires me so much more

*~coco~*




Victoria
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13 posted 2001-01-16 03:14 PM


Beautifully written..and i adore the painting coco..HUGS

               ~V~
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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  




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