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dgvarner
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0 posted 2001-01-16 01:27 AM



whispered kisses
i leave on your pillow
like stars fallen from the sky...

i'm sorry love
i must be leaving--
day breaks
and the world begins

i do not wish
to leave this wrinkled canvas
where we've painted
our portrait of heaven...

     as quietly you breathe
     honeysuckle sighs...

whispered kisses
i leave on your pillow--
on your cheek
     on your brow
          your lips
               your skin...
          like sighs
     falling...
from...

the day will wait...

-dgvarner
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"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..."  cat stevens

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 01-16-2001).]

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kcsgrandma
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1 posted 2001-01-16 01:31 AM


Yes, the day will wait.    Always time for those whispered kisses.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

VAS
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2 posted 2001-01-16 01:31 AM


Did you post this before or somewhere else?  It sounds and physically looks so familiar.  I really like it, it has an intriguing look and feel to it.
dgvarner
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3 posted 2001-01-16 09:15 AM


MAR..yes, and time for dreams...  

VAS..thank you for reading    no..i havent posted this poem anywhere before..just wrote it last nite in response to a reply from a certain canadian to my poem 'MESMERIZED'     ..(this is a bit like that one..?  or possibly similar to one called 'confetti wishes'..?  maybe all mine sound the same...lol)

hugs, g


"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens

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4 posted 2001-01-16 09:24 AM


Dee love, this is utterly superb, you have achieved a higher lovel love. Trust me I have taste, ask Kari, she'll tell you. (She'll say it's not to be relied on, but it is! Honestly) This is truly wonderful love absolutely excellant, like my taste, utterly excellant.
Take care love
                 Bubbles
                    
This is truly one of your best. And your poems don't all sound the same love. They are only alike in that they are all magnificent   be good  but not too ........
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



SEA
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5 posted 2001-01-16 09:35 AM


I sure wish the day could wait around here........beautifully done!   -SEA
Parker
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6 posted 2001-01-16 11:02 AM


dg, what more could one ask for...  
the day does wait.... but I look for those whispers at nite.  

Parker

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7 posted 2001-01-16 11:10 AM


And I dearly love the ending, or is it really the beginning?  


Write on!
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8 posted 2001-01-16 07:07 PM


DG~
Exquisite !

'i do not wish
to leave this wrinkled canvas
where we've painted
our portrait of heaven...'


Oh, yes ... it is just that way.
It just slinked right down the page ...
Lovely, lady.

And 'fiddle-dee-dee' ... your thoughts are uniquely you each and every time you write.
~*Marge*~


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9 posted 2001-01-17 07:21 AM


oh yes....I love those whispered kisses...

excellent penned as always

((hugs))
Charisma

Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 2001-01-17 08:20 AM


Marge has already quoted that exqusite verse. What a great image you portray in this poem
You are truly talented
Liz

dgvarner
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11 posted 2001-01-17 09:47 AM


BUBBLES..well my friend, you always make me smile by saying such sweet things!  thanks much as always  

SEA..just ..well..every now and then...call in late!    

PARKER..picture--early morn before the sun rises love..    would that be ok with you?  if not..we could reschedule for night...

SUNNY..exactly....  

MARGE..'exquisite'..wow    love your reply..    and thanks for 'fiddle dee dee' too.....!

CHARISMA..i thank you so much friend poet  

ELIZABETH..thank you!  so glad you stopped in to read me  

you guys are so cool!  thanks a bunch!!

hugs, g



Mark Bohannan
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12 posted 2001-01-17 09:51 AM


Yeppers..........the darn day can wait.  Wonderful piece from you.  I truely liked the style you used also.
Parker
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13 posted 2001-01-17 12:08 PM


Yes, that will do nicely.  

Parker

dgvarner
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14 posted 2001-01-17 04:46 PM


COWBOY MARK..glad you enjoyed the dream    good to hear from you  

PARKER..thought you might reconsider...

hugs cowboys..    g

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15 posted 2002-01-20 01:51 PM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is soooooooo beautiful and tender! (kiss on cheek) May he forever touch your heart with kisses, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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