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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-01-15 11:49 PM



Playground Of My Mind
~*Marge Tindal*~

Yesterday's memories gather
on the playground of my mind
Merry-Go-Round of delight
spinning me dizzily into you
Swinging across the jungle of your gym
I slide down the other side of me
to see- if you -saw my smile
Sifting memories fill the sandbox
I hopscotch to catch the dodgeball of you
You, with your monkeybar shenanigans
Skipping rope across my heart

The playground is open 9-5 !
Come on in !






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Nate Dogg
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1 posted 2001-01-15 11:51 PM


Beautiful thoughts Marge from a very enchanting mind...I loved it...brilliant!

Nathan

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2 posted 2001-01-15 11:54 PM


I'd love to play! Thanks for the invite--see you all soon!  
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3 posted 2001-01-15 11:55 PM


Oh how fun it is to visit the playground of memory.
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4 posted 2001-01-16 01:50 AM


Nate, my friend~
Don't know 'bout that enchanting ...
but I've a mind to get me one of those !

Elizabeth~
Come on down !

INot2B~
Ah, it is to be a child again !
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 2001-01-16 02:07 AM


aw marge..you know with a title like that,i had to stop in to play!  

what a fun little ditty..very creative!  loved it!  

hugs, g


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6 posted 2001-01-16 02:37 AM


beautiful, NOW GO TO BED!
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-01-16 02:43 AM


DG~
Glad to catch you playing !

Kevin~
You're supposed to say -

Now, go to bed, beautiful.

*kiss*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2001-01-16 02:51 AM



well it aint between 9-5 but I'm gonna play anyway  
Loved it Margie...so cute
~HUGS~
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



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9 posted 2001-01-16 09:20 AM


Tracie~
Such an ADORABLE graphic ! !
Thank you for joining in the fun !  
~*Marge*~
< !signature-->

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                       noles1@totcon.com       



[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 01-16-2001).]

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10 posted 2001-01-16 09:28 AM


Marge~ I'll bring my "Jacks" and we can play with them!   Loved this   -SEA
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11 posted 2001-01-16 11:35 AM


My mind went bouncing off on a pogo stick. *G* How nice that I can borrow yours during working hours! LOL
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12 posted 2001-01-16 02:14 PM


SEA~
LOL @ "Jacks" !

SuthernGal~
Not so sure my mind would be a bargain -
but you're welcome to it !
~*Marge*~


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13 posted 2001-01-16 07:35 PM


Marge, I'd love to play in your play ground and will as soon as I make some faces at the mall!  Boy, could this be a blast!!!
     Hugs, ME

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14 posted 2001-01-16 08:17 PM


Another fun Poem from you haa..loved it Marge..skipping away

                ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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15 posted 2001-01-17 07:24 AM


MotherEarth~
You are surely welcome in this playground at anytime.
A mind is a wonderful place to play !

Victoria~
Thanks, lady.
Glad to know you found time to play.
~*Marge*~





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16 posted 2001-01-17 07:42 AM


Okay.....okay, I'm coming....I have some time left...

*giggle*

((hugs))
Charisma

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17 posted 2001-01-17 01:56 PM


Would that be am or pm???  

What a fun read.  Loved your use of the playground equipment in your little romp across the playground of our minds.  

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18 posted 2001-01-18 04:36 PM


Charisma~
LOL !
You've definitely got 'time-on-your-hands' ... er, back !
Love it !

MarkB~
Come on over - we'll be open for you day or night !
~*Marge*~


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19 posted 2001-01-18 04:52 PM



This just so cute    Marge, you are just too precious for words.  Seriously, you should write a children's book of poetry - it would sell millions! Can I be your manager, but, I get 70%   LOL!  Truly, this is just so sweet with a great flow.  I love this to pieces.  

Take care,
Melissa


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Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2001-01-18 08:26 PM


Melissa~
LOL !
70% ????


I'm blonde - but I'm not THAT BLONDE !

*Thanks, punkin !
~*Marge*~


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21 posted 2001-01-18 08:38 PM


You're not blonde...you're pure GOLD...and this is pure Precious...and brought back lots and lots of childhood mem'ries...
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22 posted 2001-01-18 08:46 PM



Okay Marge, you got me!  Fine, I guess I could lower it to 65%, but that's my final offer  

Truly, have you ever considered publishing a book of your favourite poetry or a book of children's poetry?  You have the talent for it!


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



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23 posted 2001-01-18 09:05 PM


A delightful way to spend the day...especially 9 to 5.....hehehe.....thanks for the giggles, Marge!

Denise

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24 posted 2001-02-10 02:35 AM


Marge, this is sooooooooooooo sweet....
And ya know I would never retreat from your invite so here I am...

~coco~

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25 posted 2001-02-10 11:40 AM


Karilea~
*smiles*  Come and play !

Melissa~
Thanks for your kind thoughts.

Denise~
It is an effective meandering place...Yep !

Dani~
Alright ! !
I love the ups and downs ! !
Adorable graphic ... thank you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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