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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2001-01-15 10:19 PM


All in Favor

All in favor say “I”
Say “I’m the butt-sniffer”
Say “I’m not a what-iffer
If all I do is follow
Then I may be hard to swallow
But damned if I’m in favor
And that’s what really matters
My frailty will not shatter
And my empty head won’t splatter
When it’s filled with lullabyes
In my mind I know are lies
But my mind is empty too
Cuz I fill it up with you

You’re my lie... my lie...
No one elses lie but mine
And I’m willing to be thine
Rock me gently passionate lover
And my heart will thus resign
Is it truly a bad connection
When I'm spinned in wrong direction
Every time your gone away
You say it’s a lag delay
But I think your harem calls
Lotta kills on trophy walls
I have come to the conclusion
And I’ve made my final wish
Throw me back into the salty sea
I’m to small to be your fish





[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 01-15-2001).]

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Lady Lightning
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1 posted 2001-01-16 02:15 AM


Oh my , this is so, so good...

But I think your harem calls
Lotta kills on trophy walls
I have come to the conclusion
And I’ve made my final wish
Throw me back into the salty sea
I’m to small to be your fish

Loved this one!!!  ~LL~



The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

cruz
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2 posted 2001-01-16 01:39 PM


pretty cool!  i like the rhyming and it flows off the tongue rather easily.  check your mail

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3 posted 2001-01-16 03:23 PM


Walt~ even though I have no idea what you mean here, it does flow rather nice   -SEA
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