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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-01-15 09:04 PM



Who's Gonna Hold You, Darling ?
~*Marge Tindal*~

Who's gonna hold you darling,
when those teardrops start falling ?
Who's gonna kiss you
and swear that they've missed you
and wipe all your teardrops away ?

Who's gonna fold you
in strong arms and hold you
whispering sweet kisses 'til dawn ?
When the sun rises,
who's gonna offer surprises
of sunbeams to dance on the lawn ?

Who's gonna love you forever,
promising to forget you never ?
Who's gonna be here tomorrow,
sheltering you from all of life's sorrow ?

Just so you'll be knowing
it's nowhere I'm going,
I'm gonna love you forever, darling !






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Robert Joseph
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1 posted 2001-01-15 09:52 PM



Marge, forever love...what a dream come true! A pleasure to read you, once again.

Robert Joseph

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2 posted 2001-01-15 09:59 PM


Oops...thought this was going one way, and you pulled the rug out...

well done! Got me!

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3 posted 2001-01-15 10:01 PM



You speak of true love and devotion so sweetly!   Wonderful sentiment and flow. Enjoyed the read.

Take care,
Melissa


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4 posted 2001-01-15 10:10 PM


'Who's gonna fold you
in strong arms and hold you
whispering sweet kisses 'til dawn?'

Beautiful, Marge, just beautiful!  I love it!

sp  


I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

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5 posted 2001-01-15 10:33 PM


Marge--lovely poem, its always warming to read your words, like a hug...beautiful write.

Poeminister

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6 posted 2001-01-15 10:35 PM


This piece is delightful and lovely written Marge....wonderful write!!!!

Nathan

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7 posted 2001-01-15 10:40 PM


Who's going to reply to this melodious rhyme with smiles so bright from this read which has brought much delight...
*~coco~*
that's who...
loved the poem Marge


[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-15-2001).]

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8 posted 2001-01-15 10:52 PM


Marge glad you have someone to hold on tight to...thought about the "Cars" song after reading this..."Who's gonna drive your car tonight?   James
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9 posted 2001-01-15 11:19 PM


RJ~
Thank you, hon.
It's always a pleasure to share with you.

Karilea~
LOL !  Gotta watch that bottom step, sugar !
*wink*

Melissa~
Love and devotion ARE sweet -
so very, very sweet and real.
Thank you always for the smile in your friendship.

SnowPants~
Good to see you.
Thank you so much for the kind comments.

PoeMinister~
Awww !  You say the nicest things.
*HUG*

Nate, my friend~
So very pleased you enjoyed it.

Dani~
Got you bursting into rhyme AND a smile -
that's two for two on the night !
*smiling here*

James~
Thank you !
LOL ! I'm driving, babe !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2001-01-15 11:22 PM


How wonderful of you to take the e-mail you sent me and make a poem out of it!! You are awesome!!  
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11 posted 2001-01-15 11:57 PM


Blabberdeer ! !
And you said you didn't tell ! !

But, now that it's out ... I'm glad you like it.  
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


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12 posted 2001-01-16 12:15 PM


Loved this poem, such a heart felt work of art.
Love and light,
Richard

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MaxTec~
Thank you.
Shucks, I feel that way about all of them !
*wink*
~*Marge*~


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14 posted 2001-01-16 04:34 AM


Forever is for always  
Loving this Margie
~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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15 posted 2001-01-16 10:20 AM


That is why you are like the angel in our pockets.........we know you are going to be there.  Wonderful write my friend.
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16 posted 2001-01-16 10:53 AM


Wow,Marge,loved the words of this poem
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17 posted 2001-01-16 11:50 AM


Tracie~
Yes, I would have known that you would, sweet poet.

MarkB~
Awwww !  You're such a sweetheart !
Yep, ya' are !

VanDana~
Thank you, honey.
I love knowing that you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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18 posted 2001-01-16 01:24 PM


Marge, this is so good. Loved it and it makes me feel good, too.  Hugs for you, ME
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19 posted 2001-01-16 02:54 PM


Marge..*wow* glad that I could make it to catch this wondrous piece of love.

love it my friend....and excellent penned as always.

((hugs))
Charisma

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20 posted 2001-01-16 03:48 PM


WELL DONE MARGE
WE CAN ALWAYS COUNT ON YOU
TO GIVE US NEW THOUGHTS TO PONDER

GUESS THE LINEUP TO HOLD YOU IS FORVER<><>

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21 posted 2001-01-16 03:58 PM


Lovely as a song, Marge, on a spring day!

Corinne

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22 posted 2001-01-16 04:26 PM


Aww Marge..Love forever from you, what more could he want!!
Such a sweet treat to come here and read your work..You are simply too cute!!
Make me smile when I need it, you do!! Hugs ~LL~

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23 posted 2001-01-16 05:15 PM


Margie girl, truly delightful, and yes of course I love it. One of your utter wonders love
Take care
                 Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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24 posted 2001-01-16 07:11 PM


love is a grand feeling, indeed you have shared your heart with this, and us....lovely marge....

Greeneyes~




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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



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25 posted 2001-01-16 07:25 PM


MotherEarth~
I truly like knowing it made you 'feel good'.
Thanks, my friend.

Charisma~
I'm just awfully glad you are hear dear.
Thank you.

SoaringEagle~~>
Well, my love - if that's true -
Your number is up cause you're #1 with me !

Corinne~
Thanks, gal.  Hope it caught you singing.

LadyLightning~
Such a nice reply and I sincerely appreciate it.

Marsha~
Yes, of course you do, luv.
And you are such a dear to say so.

GreenEyes~
It is, isn't it hon ?
Thank you for enjoying a slice of my heart.
~*Marge*~



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26 posted 2001-01-16 07:35 PM


Marge~ it's impossible not to love this gem! It's wonderful!!   -SEA
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27 posted 2001-01-16 08:56 PM


Marge~

Never ceasing to amaze me. It was so sweet, it belongs in our V-Day issue of Passions. I loved every line  .

~Susie


"Many people hear voices when no one is there. Some of them are called mad and are shut up in rooms where they stare at walls all day. Others are call

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28 posted 2001-01-16 09:48 PM


SEA~
Well, you just go right ahead -
I thank you, sweetie.

Angel~
What a wonderful thing for you to say.
Thank you so very much.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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29 posted 2001-01-16 10:12 PM


(sigh) Oh yes, everyone belongs to one another I believe, and you two definitely belong to each other! This was a very lovely poem, Marge! May true love forever blossom in you and your love! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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30 posted 2001-01-17 11:46 AM


Noah~
It's such a pleasure to share writings from the heart with others.
I'm really appreciative of your replies.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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