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0 posted 2001-01-15 08:39 PM


Keeper of the Keys

Keeper of the Keys
keeps my heart eternally
love turns golden key

writes my diary
unlocks there the words of me
love turns gold the key

crosses the drawbridge
unlocks the barred door to me
love turns golden key

Keeper of the Keys
hold you safe this key of me
welcome home my love

01.15.01


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-01-15 09:51 PM


SweetPoetGal~
You sure know how to unlock a memory or two.
This is splendid.
~*Marge*~



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2 posted 2001-01-15 10:23 PM


Gracefully penned...I like!

Poeminister

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3 posted 2001-01-15 10:33 PM


Splendid write...I like it!

Nathan

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4 posted 2001-01-15 10:35 PM


Sunshine, your poem is entrancing...
I could read this over and over again and well I shall by threading to my library...
ThankU PoetFriend for this beautiful write
*~coco~*

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5 posted 2001-01-15 10:36 PM


I apologize for this double post but I came back to clic the library thread which I failed to clic before...
coco

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6 posted 2001-01-15 11:01 PM


Simple and heartfelt.....that's the key..

This one sings,,,,

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7 posted 2001-01-15 11:11 PM


Very nice.  Enjoyed muchly.
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8 posted 2001-01-15 11:21 PM


Yes...love makes the key gold...lovely!
Sunshine
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9 posted 2001-01-16 09:02 AM


Thank you all for unlocking many wondrous moments for me here, in Passions...just my little way of saying you all hold beautiful keys in the tip of your pen, and in the weave of your thoughts...
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10 posted 2001-01-16 09:16 AM


Kari love, no you didn't you fibber, you had some sunshine to impart so you wrote this. I know me!! Utterly wonderful dear heart. As it always is. (And don't think you can fool me with this just a little gift malarkey I know this is pure gold)  
Take care love
              Majestic Marsha
                      
              


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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11 posted 2001-01-16 09:57 AM


I loved the way you blended the metaphoric keys with the mental pictures of maidens, castles, knights and drawbridges - at least that's how my Lancelot mind interpreted.
Let down your hair I shall climb ~S~

[This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 01-16-2001).]

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12 posted 2001-01-17 09:02 AM


ah but Marsha...my only intent ever is to share...and that is all...well...perhaps shine just a little...LOL...

Mr. Yeats...interpret away...if I can lend dreams of castles, then be free to be the Knight...{~,^}...thank you!


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13 posted 2001-01-17 09:22 AM


oh these are wonderful penned...love it....

((hugs))
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14 posted 2001-01-17 11:00 AM


Thank you for the hugs Charisma...this likes me too....
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