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Sven
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0 posted 2001-01-15 08:14 PM


*for the Phoenix and all who need strength. . . *

power of Darkness
come to me this night
destroy all those
who would hide in light

destroy their facades
with your dark power
expose their fear
in this, their final hour

give back to those
who have suffered harm
rest and vengence
from thy strong arm

give pain to those
who would falsely sing
silence their voices
remove from them the rings

from thy hands of power
give back the songs
to those who have sung
all this night long

and in thy dark light
let us rise again
to see thy dark face
and to remember when

power of Darkness
come to me this night
destroy all those
who would hide in light

and as they fade away
let us know their pain
that we may be stronger
when comes the rain. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
athena4
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1 posted 2001-01-15 08:26 PM


Sven
   What a beautiful penning of justice for the weak and deserving. You have captured this sentiment so fully and completely...
           Much love, Elise

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2 posted 2001-01-15 09:18 PM


Beautiful!  


Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?


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3 posted 2001-01-15 09:41 PM


Yes, I agree..
You have said it again..
Sandra

inot2B
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4 posted 2001-01-15 11:26 PM


It is dark and the rains have started.
May it wash away your PAIN!

Poeminister
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5 posted 2001-01-16 12:00 PM


"who would hide in light"...

"destroy their facades"

Excellent...Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister< !signature-->

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O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
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Kethry
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6 posted 2001-01-16 06:49 AM


Sven,
Moonlight becomes you, your light of justice shines brighter that ever.
write on
Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Sven
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7 posted 2001-01-16 07:31 PM


Elise, thank you my friend. . . those who are weak will always receive justice in the end. . . much love to you also. . .  

Temptress, thank you!!  

Sandra, thank you my friend. . . glad that I could speak the words. . .

inot2B, weep not for me my friend. . . but for those for whom no one weeps. . . thank you for your words. . .

Poeminister, thank you for reading. . . glad that you enjoyed. . .

Kethry, they say that there is much power in the night. . . hopefully I've sent some of it to those that need it. . . thank you my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2001-01-17 12:41 PM


those who are weak will always receive justice in the end. . .

Do you really believe that Sven?..and is that a bit vengeful..I am told  that that is what I am doing, being vengeful by seeking what I feel I deserve out of my past 30 years of life...makes me doubt myself at times...

*making me think, which is a bit hard to do with this pounding I have in myhead *s

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



SEA
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with you
9 posted 2001-01-18 01:27 AM


Sven~ Wow.........excellent!   -SEA
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