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maxtec1
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0 posted 2001-01-15 04:37 PM


Together Forever
By Richard Maxfield
1-15-2001

Rose peddles falling
Like drops
From the sky

Moves me to passion
Trough loves
Watchful eye

Birds singing
Their tender
Sweet song

My heart
Has been waiting
For you so long

Light shines bright
So brilliant
So true

A dream
A prayer
Embodied in you

More than destiny
One love
Or chance

Kiss your lips
Pull close
Romance

This my life
For you
I give

Together forever
In love
We live



[This message has been edited by maxtec1 (edited 01-15-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
snowpants
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1 posted 2001-01-15 08:29 PM


Hey, what is this doing on page 2 with no replies???  This is beautiful!!  The one on the receiving end of this poetry is one lucky lady, Richard!!  I enjoyed this!!

sp  


I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

maxtec1
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2 posted 2001-01-15 10:40 PM


Thank you SP for your very nice comment.
Love and light,
Richard

Pixydust
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3 posted 2001-01-16 12:24 PM


Richard,

THIS IS GREAT! I can't believe it. What a precious picture of what love is. Whoever she is, she's a lucky gal.

Beautifully done! Pixydust

Nate Dogg
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4 posted 2001-01-16 12:33 PM


Well done, Max, I feel like I could sing to this!

Nathan

1slick_lady
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5 posted 2001-01-16 12:58 PM


as always richard i love your words
maxtec1
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6 posted 2001-01-17 02:32 PM


Thank you my friends for your comments.
Love and light,
Richard

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7 posted 2001-01-18 12:55 PM


Richard~ very sweet sentiments here, enjoyed   -SEA
Lady Lightning
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8 posted 2001-01-18 11:26 AM


Aww Rich....
You KNOW just how to bring that smile, don't ya?  
Loved this, as usual..As you know, I always do...  
Hugs   ~LL~


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

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