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KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
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Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-01-15 04:06 PM




relentless sun dominates
parched longing;just a mirage
a lonely sojourn

desert wanderer
my soul thirsts for refreshment
hidden oasis
crystalline pools of pleasure
your blue eyes reflecting love




Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
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KS
1 posted 2001-01-15 07:29 PM


Such great images in so few lines!  I like this! (and can relate, too)  Love the graphic too!

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I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
2 posted 2001-01-15 10:43 PM


Thank you muchly!  < !signature-->
me too!!!!!!


Passion,imagination
  and intellect
    running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko
  



[This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 01-16-2001).]

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
3 posted 2001-01-15 11:59 PM


Ohh, I just loved the graphic, it's just seems so beautifully unreal....and the poem, well it had some great lines my soul thirsts for refreshment.

Peace


Nathan

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