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maxtec1
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0 posted 2001-01-15 10:43 AM



Valentine Valentine
By Richard Maxfield
1-15-2001

Valentine Valentine
Who will you be
Love awaits
For you and me

Open arms wait
Romantic heart needs
Love’s gracious flower
Form your seed

Dancing candlelight
Walks in rain
Playful nips
Slow rocking trains

Hand and hand
Cheek to cheek
Heart to heart
No need to speak

Garden of love
For us to tend
Two lovers
Two best of friends

For this awaits
My dear Valentine
Who are you
Will you be mine

© Copyright 2001 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
Victoria
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1 posted 2001-01-15 10:54 AM


she is the one who is staring at you when you are looking away..

                  ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



maxtec1
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2 posted 2001-01-15 12:05 PM


Will you watch for me so I can see who she is. LOl thank you my friend for taking the time to read and comment.
Love and light,
Richard

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2001-01-15 02:04 PM


She is the one who has been standing next to you all along, but you didn't see because you were busy looking!! Loved this, Richard!!


Write on!
-<--<--{(@



maxtec1
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4 posted 2001-01-15 04:40 PM


Sunny thank you for you comment.
love and light,
Richard

Lady Lightning
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5 posted 2001-01-16 12:53 PM


Lookin' for your Valentine, Rich?
Maybe I can help ya....    
Loved this one.... Hugs  ~LL~


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

VAS
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6 posted 2001-01-16 01:40 AM


Really like this, especially this stanza:

Dancing candlelight
Walks in rain
Playful nips
Slow rocking trains

maxtec1
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Garland, Tx
7 posted 2001-01-17 02:30 PM


LL well yas I would like to have a laddy in my life. Who ya got in mind. LOL
Love and light,
Richard


Vas thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Love and light,
Richard

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