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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-01-15 01:20 AM


after the storm
there you are
the prism shining
in my sky...
the covenant
of promised bless
to wipe the teardrop
from my eye...
and there are times
in life we seek
a stranger's eyes in lingered stare...
and so sublime
is love's release
to greet the angel, unaware.


*be well, lovely one...prayers in my heart for you*

© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Poeminister
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1 posted 2001-01-15 01:26 AM


Serenity--Beautiful write and dedication...
wonderfully penned.

Poeminister


[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-15-2001).]

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-01-15 01:50 AM


Serenity~
You're a little sweetie, ya' know ?
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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Stan
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3 posted 2001-01-15 02:07 AM



Serenity,

You have a wonderful touch for expressing your heart.
A rare talent and genius.  I admire you so!

Thanks so much,   Stan


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4 posted 2001-01-15 06:30 PM


Sweet and perfect.
Sandra

Kethry
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5 posted 2001-01-16 07:22 AM


serenity, I too recently wrote a poem called angels unaware (it must be the magnetic flux) but I like yours so much more!
Write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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6 posted 2001-01-16 10:30 AM


This is a sweet poem for a very sweet man. If I may...I'll agree with every word, and add extra Thanks to him for his friendship so far.  


Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?


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